Fathom This vs Dopium
 

Battle Rules:

30-40 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Topic - The road less traveled

Minimum posts to vote: 700

Check in by: 12-18-05 at 06:02 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Fathom This has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-15-05 07:07 PM.

Dopium has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-18-05 02:17 AM.

A dark narrow path thats never traveled.
pitch black with nothing to hear to save you hastle.
a road you take with feelings of not seein another day.
And a place you can go to meet people without a name. so silent that every footstep can break the sound barrier.
tense and aware I can smell my own fear in the air.

*Falls asleep*

*Wakes up*

as daylight arrives my heart beats recklessly.
With no way to explain the expressions inside of me.
My world's crumbling in nightmares that are disgusting.
This path is a curse & could put anyone in a black herse.
I've been through some shit but this is by far my worst.
My pain aches and my lifes at a cautious steak.
can somebody be my brace when tears rush down my face?
Why can't everything be as it was??? instead of tears im sheadin blood.

*A week passes*

its been 6 days since I left that living nightmare.
And I still cant see myself in the mirror.
disfigure distinct corruption reserved for withdraw of terror.
Such a dense memory to remember it feels like im bein choked.
Insane illusions remain to appear I open my eyes and revoked.

i'm trying to post my verse.. this gonna be hella hard

I have 18 lines.. i might be able to get this done

Ight try though lmao and how much lines do u have right now aswe speak? and are u at work still? lol :laugh:

even though u have 18 lines its still hard as fck for you to do this by the time? :huh:

AHHH


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i didnt finish