fed up
 

I try to block out ur thoughts cuz they only bring me down
I just remember im better and your a bitching clown
You surrender to me when I turn into defence mode
cuz you canot contol me I'm a demon waiting to explode
Your ain't capable of a win so just take a punch to the chin
and remeber that you are fake and don't know anything
I read everything that goes on cuz it stresses me
my life has been turn around which depresses me
Ever since I was turned around I started to get down
I might aswell be dead cuz my souls lost n never found
everything is crashing on me I can't prevent from lashing out
My eyes roll back in my skull and my pupils begin flashing out
my spirits is fading away by the day.. I'm so afraid
Everything I say gets raped and left on it's own a stray
I'm Tired of your hatred and your vivous ways
I'm sick of this life and having 2 climb another day


I'm tired of everything

i thought it was nice some decent emotion but i thought it would of been alot better if it was longer

Good Emotion. The Concept is played and your approach to the Topic is played and not creative. I've seen these kinda of Topics been done before. You got Emotion and flow but you need some meataphors and similies, some wordplay to spice your piece up. Overall this was alright like 'rex' said it should've been longer but more adding features to the verse. Overall Keep writing.