Young Dollar vs Apostrophe
 

Battle Rules:

16 lines max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No B/S Votes
Well explained votes only
3-0 K.O. and 4-1 K.O.
Provin D/R or ask for votes will result in Vote being DQed if continue MC will be DQed.

Fair enough don't ya say. I just had alot of problems with DQed and asked for votes. So good Luck Fam.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-19-05 at 07:28 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.


Expired battle win - close

Young Dollar has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-16-05 07:31 PM.

Sit back while i test the water on this fruit making his melon swell
Showin crews i aint gotta be smokin 2 blunts to be blazin a double L
Your spektacular end like Empires that didnt take Moses's signs serious
Disrepect the all whats apostrophe,Changin and bringin dis battle to a period
Sure look gangsta in ya sig,fitted cap and shades like ya ready to slang coke
But you gon have me and RV laughing when all your crack comes up jokes
Try to illustrate the hustler image,need to take that anime shit back to the nation
Cuz you color outside the thug lines gon have to make me use punch-U-asian (punctuation)
To put this to a stop, false usin zip-lock,the rap game you try to lock it
While I lock it like old school gameboy catriges off up in my pocket
Legends suppose to be establishish,No be known for great and legendary keystyle
But yet ya crew was one of the last if ever to step to being bitched by E-Style
Excuses being like its about respect for line in they time, but in your mind
Your lyricaly behind,not even for the fact my rhyme steady sinks you in your seat
Like a broken recline,Admit ya creative bringin personafaction to a finger key sweep


Dont get the punches don't vote. Uppin for this battle and stay up folk. Explained votes only

Apostrophe has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-16-05 11:56 PM.

Your Just A Dummy With A Mic, && Its Funny Cuz I'm Right
Dolla? Please, He Won't Have That Much Money In His Life
Dawg, Your Verse Is Weak, No One Will Be Stealing It..
My Punchs'll Crack Your Jaw So Much
........................................DrugLords Will Be Dealing It
Dont Get Bent, My Punches Leave Yah Cranium Full Of Dents..
Kid's Only Young Dolla.. Cause his Rhymes Dont Make Cents
I'm Rich Kid, You Cant Even Count The Money I've Spent..
I'd Have No Problem Ripping Dolla, Even Though
.................................................. .Its A Federal Offense
Not Trying To Get Cocky, But Dolla Im Sayin Ur Beat..
Cause U Get Hit More Then Blind Kids Playing In Streets..

Voted For: Apostrophe

Sit back while i test the water on this fruit making his melon swell
Showin crews i aint gotta be smokin 2 blunts to be blazin a double L
...The whole L/blunt idea is played.
Your spektacular end like Empires that didnt take Moses's signs serious
Disrepect the all whats apostrophe,Changin and bringin dis battle to a period
....Weak,and this bar was kinda stretched out too
Sure look gangsta in ya sig,fitted cap and shades like ya ready to slang coke
But you gon have me and RV laughing when all your crack comes up jokes
...Wtf @ the first line :wtf:
Try to illustrate the hustler image,need to take that anime shit back to the nation
Cuz you color outside the thug lines gon have to make me use punch-U-asian (punctuation)
...Forced.It's pronounced more like PUNk-CHEW-ASIAN,not Punch-U-Asian..wordplay has to be homophonic or else it's forced.
To put this to a stop, false usin zip-lock,the rap game you try to lock it
While I lock it like old school gameboy catriges off up in my pocket
...Good
Legends suppose to be establishish,No be known for great and legendary keystyle
But yet ya crew was one of the last if ever to step to being bitched by E-Style
....Good personal,but the 1st line was stretched
Excuses being like its about respect for line in they time, but in your mind
Your lyricaly behind,not even for the fact my rhyme steady sinks you in your seat
Like a broken recline,Admit ya creative bringin personafaction to a finger key sweep
...Blah,boring...

Your Just A Dummy With A Mic, && Its Funny Cuz I'm Right
Dolla? Please, He Won't Have That Much Money In His Life
...Liked the multis,punch was a little iffy tho
Dawg, Your Verse Is Weak, No One Will Be Stealing It..
My Punchs'll Crack Your Jaw So Much
........................................DrugLords Will Be Dealing It
....decent
Dont Get Bent, My Punches Leave Yah Cranium Full Of Dents..
Kid's Only Young Dolla.. Cause his Rhymes Dont Make Cents
...Good
I'm Rich Kid, You Cant Even Count The Money I've Spent..
I'd Have No Problem Ripping Dolla, Even Though
.................................................. .Its A Federal Offense
...Wasn't feelin all the dots,but a good punch.
Not Trying To Get Cocky, But Dolla Im Sayin Ur Beat..
Cause U Get Hit More Then Blind Kids Playing In Streets..
..Played,way too many blind kid lines.

Ok,I gotta give this battle to apostrophe..
I expected better from young dollar in this battle.For one,his shit was stretched.His lines are waay too long for the rhyme scheme that he uses.And a lot of punches were weak.Like the forced wordplay,where he tried to make punctuation into punch-u-asian.That shit doesn't work...

Vote-Apostrophe

Drop an honest vote in the link below plz.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213623

This was feedback posted for Apostrophe
 

lmfao ahahahahahahahahaha

The blind kids line murdered him

Voted For: Young Dollar

Your spektacular end like Empires that didnt take Moses's signs serious
Disrepect the all whats apostrophe,Changin and bringin dis battle to a period
To put this to a stop, false usin zip-lock,the rap game you try to lock it
While I lock it like old school gameboy catriges off up in my pocket
Your lyricaly behind,not even for the fact my rhyme steady sinks you in your seat
Like a broken recline,Admit ya creative bringin personafaction to a finger key sweep

Young Dolla had some concepts.. some executed nicely some failed.. overall decent verse.. i almost quoted the opener


Dawg, Your Verse Is Weak, No One Will Be Stealing It..
My Punchs'll Crack Your Jaw So Much
........................................DrugLords Will Be Dealing It
Dont Get Bent, My Punches Leave Yah Cranium Full Of Dents..
Kid's Only Young Dolla.. Cause his Rhymes Dont Make Cents

apostrophe woulda won if he worded the federal offense line better.. young wins by a hair.

This was feedback posted for Young Dollar
 

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Voted For: Young Dollar

my vote goes to young dollar because his flowed nicer and lines were eazy to understand and u final line was more punchin then his

apostrohe i didnt vote for urs cus lines werent as nice and didnt flow nice as his and ur final lines were weak need fixin but good

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: Apostrophe

Vote- Apostrophe

I thought Apostrophe took flow, and only because his multis were placed well within his rhyme schemes. Young had good flow as well, but I thought his bars were stretched a bit. Punches were just about even, both catz had some cripplin' shit that was vicious, and both had some punches that feel short. Apostrophe took personals, there was one in just about every line, and they either set up his punches, or backed up his punches nicely. Young dollar had a great bar 'bringin' apostrophe to a period' that I dug...clever shit man...Young just didn't have as many personals...Wordplay was about even, both catz had it and used it...Apostrophe took multis easily, they helped his schemes and aided his punches nicely...Young dollar had some multis, but he didn't use as many, and they weren't as clean.

Good battle, both catz are skilled.

Vote- Apostrophe