My Own UnBorn Child
 

....................................Gone.

Holly fuckin molly no1 replied to this...

this has to be yo best work ...am impressed,
emotions had me on this...imagery was vivid

Her hands around my neck; gagging me.
Feeling my throat being punctured by her fingers,
a death feeling inside of me quietly lingers,
"honey, honey, please I can't breathe"
"Your the key to my twelve babies death,


^^damn.. nice work shawty

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2580232
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2580240


STFU

Uppin.

uPPIN................

this was all that plus more, emtion was there flow was nice concept was great and you delievered a prefect drop nicely done

Thank you

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2580923

The spelling errors set me off.

Ditto...............

DAMN.....................nice WORK fasho....................real nice work



yea this is your best NO DOUBT....emotion and Vocab was there....stayed strong through the whole VERSE....DAMN/

Thank you................

*slapz herself in da face, then pinches herself* yup ok dis was fo real.....lol.....good piece ma.......hella good!!!....da emotion was VERY deep; da flow was dope as hell; imagery was tiight; omg we need 2 do a collabo sumtime......get @ me.....10/10...keep up da good work ma...1

O_o....Thank you.......

Now this was some seriously dope work.

I was amazed.

Props.

o_O Perfect flow? Like half of it doesn't even rhyme...and what the FUCK at the line 'like doing number two but with blood' and 'increasingly flood'. The grammar was off hoe.