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I left feed on;
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217290
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217163
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217226

beat is rockin

Will...u need to dub ur verse and pan them more than u do...will give ur vocals more presence

and ur vocals need to be amped some


I like ur delivery on this

u needed jus a tad more breath control for some of ur lines


but I like this


"cocky but humble"....is that possible?



holla


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Thanks For The Feed.

a I actually liked this, vocals needed to be a little bit lower to blend in with the beat, and like Q said bout the overdubbin is true maybe you should of overdubbed your whole verse 1 time, but then came back and overdubbed your main words that you felt should of been heard, like you had already done, your flow is what caught my attention pretty good shit, nah sayin

RTF please






http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217398










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alright Lethal, I'll remember to do that next time.
ok, uppin for some more feed.

YOUR VOCALS ARE TO FUCKING LOUD!!!!!!
.And your lyrics are decent...except for the daydream/night mare shit..I heard the same shit from NAs.But then again,your Will.Sun..I can't expect originality from you ;).
And ur delivery sounded wackk..
But really tho,I think ya got a vioce for a rapping.It's somewhat similar to Big L in my opinion..

So,yea...:slick:

Thanks
I'll take as a compliment comin from Natural Killa
Cod you usually be like
"this wack you gay :slick:"

so, umm, yeah. Word

uppin man
damn
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this beat remind me A LOT of some song i been listening to lately
cant remember what though =/

anyways
the delivery was kinda coo
real original, which i like...cause i consider myself to have a unique delivery, so i like seeing kids do it too
flow is nice, lyrics is hot
overall it is a pretty gutter track like you said

and word to "rubix cubes" that my favorite line
good work fam, only thing i say upped would be quality...hopefully you got rapgame on lock.
nice

beats dope as hell yo
vocals are too loud
delivery was nice
flow mad nice fam
quality was iight
but overall dis was a nice lil track
keep droppin hot tracks mayne

Beat is dope

About yo vocals they already touched on that flow was good same for delivery you really comin up son liked this track overall not much more i can say but get a new mic lol keep droppin son =1=

^my voice is sexy, chico