The First Step...
 

Will Sun Yu Diss track
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im tired of this nigga tryin to "clown" peeps all tha time... he crazy... i just wanna get tha beef started. you know, i talked about tha nigga in his thread, he didnt respond... i dont know if he heard me so, we gotta take it on another level............. TeamOne in this biatch...
this my first audio and my first diss track all in one... its only a minute long, just a sample of whats to come. After Will responds, then we get to some real shit.
here's the link!!! sorry about the audio, my voice gets a little messed up...
basically, im sayin , Wilsun, it could all be so simple if u'd keep ya mouth shut

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=453390

this shyt is ill as fuck, only thing is ur mic quality, but i might come this weekend, and if i do then ill bring u a new mic, good lyrics, nice beat selection 2, lmao@leady, but yea dope shyt, keep em comin

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...619#post2581619

wow man...way too much MIC POP

hurts my ears


but ur Flow is on point

not a bad joint homie

work on that quality tho


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YOUR QUALITY FUCKING SUCKS!!
But I like your flow 'n delivery and shit...
It's a good track...but as a diss,shit sucks.
Nothing in here really disses str8 up and raw...

ANd again
YOUR QUALITY FUCKING SUCKS!

i know u can make ur quality better.... cuz i prolly have the same setup as u (meaning a comp. mic and cool edit). and i did no editin at all on my latest track and the quality is alot better than urs... no hate tho... good flow, on the track.... haha servin wilson...... LMFAOLKMFAO

i think ur movin the mic wen ur rappin.... either that or holdin it in ur hand.... u shouldnt do that.... pretty good disses... but alil short.... u always sound like u wanna go to sleep wen u freestyle.... pretty good emotion without yellin......... i give this a One......... Team that is.... mad wordplay

thanx for the feed people... um yeah, my mic setup is like the most basic microphone you could ever find... thas why the quality and pop is so bad... next time i'll try not to hold the mic in my hand or just go to Young Law's house... i hear that nigga got a crazy set up now...
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lol yizzer..........................................