"My prayer...Before the DARK FEELINGS"...pls consider
 

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This is a remix and repost of a song I made earlier this year. It starts with a typical prayer that I'd pray to God. Then, the track comes in with me rapping about how I feel. The ending also ends with a prayer, but a drastically different one.


Holla atcha boy


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ight man let see what we got here, spoken word stuff me likes man I love all this real shit this is awsome man fo real good shit man keep droppung homie look 4ward 2 hearing and working with you.

aight peeping now

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like the prayer in the beginning....


alright that was a long prayer lol

the beat is reallly nice....i'm feelin it it sounds like i'tll be real deep

I'm feelin the first verse......u had nice multies and the flow is really nice...man i'm feelin that right there..emotion is realy nice..and the pressense is good....this is a pretty good song man real deep

8.5/10

Ok,first off..I hate your voice.You sound like elmo.
And why is the prayer at the beginning so long?A lot of it is uneccasary.Why did you do that?
God damn,it was fucking annoying.the whole time i was saying "when will the gay man shut up and rap"?

OK,the beat is good.I liked it.And your flow was nice..and so were the lyrics.Props.

The part where it said "my name is the q" sounded gay tho...lol,

Overall=Good track,something I can see myself listening too again :)
Just the prayer at the beggining was too long.
The part where your rapped was dope.

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer up






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eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer up

errrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr up

preciate da feed







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listenin dawg..i loved dark feelings so i probs liked this 1...prayer was nice..the echo on the prayer is nice...it does drag on a lil tho...but was a nice touch but maybe too long to may take the interest away..rap comes in..you re recorded huh..quality is better..flow is hot on this..i remember these lyrics like the back of my hand the serpent line is great...multis off the chain..i always loved this track..prayer was a very nice effect actually..did u eq this diff or re record?...i cud recite these words if i jus heard the beat lol..i love the endin..short n brisk...emotional..i like the sweepin phaser on it..and the gun shot that ends it..10/10