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What I Go Through Ft Ravenous
Aiight I'm back ma fuckaz. I guess i'll throw some simple shit i did. this aint anything special. the qualitys blah but get in touch with me
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217370WHAT I GO THROUGH FT RAVENOUS Lyrics provided by: Kontroverzy and Ravenous of street factions ent Mix and mastering: Ourselves Organized by: Ravenous of street factions ent Order: Ravenous, Kontroverzy http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandid=247395 lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=3229093&q=lo hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=3229093&q=hi lyrics first verse (ravenous) Lemme Introduce Myself,My Names,Rav,Im Sixteen Lemme Influence Myself,My Flames,Glad,I Spit Schemes 4 Years Of Writing Raps,3 Years Of Making Tracks 2 Years Of Lighting Scraps,1 Year Elevating Laps From A Satisfied Kid,To Music Beats Pops Prolly Wish I'd Go Back To The Lil Dude I Used To Be But Soon You'll See,Not Anymore,Im No Longer Him The Penny's Raw,I Need More Motivation God Send Me More Shorty I'll Rap To A HeartBeat,Just Lend Me Yours Twenty Corpse,Remi Poored,Raps Brought Plenty Chores I Fucked Up Bad Situations In Life ,But Many Forced This Is How It Is Wishing Ya CD Would Hit Plenty Stores Any How,,I Wish It Would All Just Come Back My Lifes A Maze,And I'll Flip It All In One Track Many Times Tried To Quit,But Somethin Sprung Back And I Was Brung Back,To Spit It All,N Kick It All In One Rap Second Verse (kontroverzy) Waz hood wat it is my name is kontro.. gat to my head, im bout to let them all blow.. the only thing i got is the pen n the tech 4 years in the game, n still no respect.. My fatha aint there..my mommas alwayz workin Still u fuckaz tellin me i gotta be perfect.. my whole life ive been runnin into the pigs.. N' it seems my own grave is so easy to dig.. But i gotta hold on, but not for myself.. for my fans that even dare to take my album off the shelf.. I thank You, Imma keep writin these tracks.. And when i die, i wanna be where the greatest are at.. When i spit i speak the truth, just layin the facts.. Everybody spittin tryna to be the greatest in rap.. You only get one chance, so reach for the sky.. and don't take shit for granted, cuz it's easy to die.. links http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2581035 |
uppin this before i leave...ill rtf
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Damn son....am feelin the delivery yo ass got the new mic huh!! its nice.....feelin the track....holla at me so we can do that collab i told u about
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Nice track here...
well,first things first...your vocals are too loud.Kinda hurt my ears.. But aside from that,everything was good. Lyrically,both verses were even.Ravenous came with a better rhyme scheme with multis,but Kon came with a more emotion,and just stronger lyrics. Both had nice flow But Kontro,I think you tried a lil' too hard here..or maybe it's just me..but your delivery sounded awfully familar to young jeezy.And I ain't feeling that.. But...still... Dope track.... |
nah i wasnt tryna be like no young jeezy. i wasnt even thinkin about soundin like no one naww meanz. i was feelin the concept of this track. so i just got into it. naww meanz
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lol....finnally somebody my age that sound goods on a track...tell ravenous to get at me for a battle...and you did sorta sound like jeezy on this joint...but nice all around
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First dude...Lyrics are really good, but delivery, presence, and flow all need work. Felt like you were just reading off of the paper and not rapping. Quality is nice from both, Kontro comes in...Killin it...Flow is on point, lyrics are meaningful for the most part, delivery is straight...Overall, this is some pretty decent shit. Kontro Im still waiting for your bitch ass to get on a fucking track :love:
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thanx famz i appreciate it. and you know ravenous?
and black magik get at me with a beat BITCH! |
Hey...I'll hacksaw your ass
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man you a faggot...lmao nah i'm playin i don't really care no more about the past BUT anyway on the my feed
pretty dope overall, i normally don't like tracks like this but this is somethin i could actually listen too ckuz my life is like that too...i live wit my moms and she always at work and shit...basically this is one dope ass track everything was on point in my opinion...flow, delivery, lyrics blah the whole thing was dope...honestly i never had much respect for you until i heard this right here...not that you care or anything jus kinda lettin you know where i'm comin from...but yeah from this point on you got my respect so if i saw your CD in a store down here...i would pick that shit up and tell my niggas to go cop that shit too...so keep more shit comin nigga |
thanx famz. i appreciate it alot. but ay squash the beef my dude..u koo wit me...ill rtf with soemthin' just get at me
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rave, work on your mic prescence put some more passion into it. but flow is on point and the lyrics are ill.
kontro, loving the style good delivery. lyrics are also good. no flaws here, keep on flowing. beat is nice, and hook is alright. really enjoyed this track, stay up check out my shit, http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2581748 |
aiight famz im bout to peep tha tin a lil...i appreciate the feedback ill get at u
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lets get it in my dudes...
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this reminds me of a song from the 80s...I can't even think of the sample it's from though....
beat is nice im quite sure this is a sample from a song from the 80s flows are good lyrics are pretty cool the hook is under produced...layer it...IMO nice track 1 |
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