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Hurricane vs Sylibus.Conador
Battle Rules:
6 -10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-21-05 at 02:16 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Sylibus.Conador has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-18-05 02:16 PM.
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gotta go so i'll drop ma verse a lil later...iighty...pz.
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Hurricane has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-18-05 02:26 PM.
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Making The "Delerious-Choke"..Dangerous Words Packed In My Voice Box So Run When I'm "Clearin-My-Throat" Ur Games "Appearin-To-Fold" After I 'Slice Ur Neck With Suicide Letters' To 'Kill U On A Serious-Note' My Verses Each One Of ''Those-Doomed-To-Kil''l..It's Obvious I'm 'Reignin' The Way My 'Flow-Ruins-Grills' Don't Appose-Fluent-Skills Cuz Like ''Full Banks'' I'll Obliterate Ur Abdomen Leaving 'No-Room-For-Mills' Rising With This ''Elevation-Fitness''..My Illness Explodes As Soon As I'm Done Detonating-Sickness Quick To Kill This "Hesitatin-Bitch" Leavin His Abandoned Corpse 'All Cut Up' Like 'Dedicated-Gymnasts" Im Sicka Of Ya Ass..Leave Now Before Hurricane Kill Ya "Blessin Stand", Cuz Everyone Knows That I Got Ya "Stressin Man" This Nasty Punch Is The "Next To Land",Cuz I’ll Have Ya“Ending Ya Life With Ya Fingers” Like “Suicidal Wedding Bands" |
im bouta drop in a couple.
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Realize with real eyez, It was this exact herb tht came to me to be popularized,
U cant B seen str8 like ppl cross eyed, Sad this bitch is soon to be fossilized, Knock This Femcee Senseless, He cant cause no 1 harm hes inoffensive, This fag's to soft hes defenseless, Killing Hurricane n' leave em relentless, Misjudging my crew now relizing ya fucked,Like ya boy when U pack his fudge, You getting killed, my knife is like a tool in photoshop, leave ya face smudged, You suck, dont drop, it'll mess up parts of ma rhyme, Ttoo small for a win, Like midgets its hard to over look me, You'll lose an crumble like cookies, Not a real emcee, I might be mistaken..aint actors only spose to star in movies? |
Realize with real eyez, It was this exact herb tht came to me to be popularized,
U cant B seen str8 like ppl cross eyed, Sad this bitch is soon to be fossilized, Knock This Femcee Senseless, He cant cause no 1 harm hes inoffensive, This fag's to soft hes defenseless, Killing Hurricane n' leave em relentless, Misjudging my crew now relizing ya fucked,Like ya boy when U pack his fudge, You getting killed, my knife is like a tool in photoshop, leave ya face smudged, You suck, dont drop, it'll mess up parts of ma rhyme, Ttoo small for a win, Like midgets its hard to over look me, You'll lose an crumble like cookies, Not a real emcee, I might be mistaken..aint actors only spose to star in movies? y bad, posted ma verse in the other thing.. |
Bump for some voters!
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This was feedback posted for Hurricane
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Voted For: Hurricane
Hurricane had the better verse... better punches, more complex rhyme style, more creative over all... these two just aren't in the same class... Opener: Hurrican Closer: Hurricane Punches: Hurricane Personals: Conador Creativity: Hurricane Complexity: Hurricane Enjoyment: Hurricane Structure: Hurricane Vote: Hurricane |
This was feedback posted for Sylibus.Conador
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Voted For: Sylibus.Conador
s.con i voted 4 u cus u had better punches and rymes and better flow and structure hurricane u can do better u got beat eazy on this one but keep tryin u had ok rymes vote s.con rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=219800 |
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