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Adam 12-19-05 03:33 AM

27. Robkilla vs. 38. Blackmage
 
Check in by Wednesday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Drop verse by Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.

10 Lines.

No Recycling.
No Biting.
No Feeding.

Good Luck..

Come Dope.

.TeamOne. 12-19-05 09:10 PM

im pumped up.... lets go
^^ here, make a wack personal outta that..........

Blackmage 12-19-05 11:44 PM

check....don't worry...i will.........

Blackmage 12-23-05 01:28 PM

I'm from I.L. your corny lines still amaized me dude
but i'm a walk all over RBK like Jay-z shoes
lazy fool this battles a sex crime, i'll make sure it gets taped
If i rob killa's i'll end up like you, behind bars gettin raped
and callin you wack is played, it's been preached from every serminal
you don't even have a rep, how the hell i'm a use a personal
leavin you terminal, give me a metaphor....somethin
not on your level though, the only that can compare to you...is nothin
I'm like spul sig, i may be a scrabble freak
I won't KORv, but R'sKO and me leave with the V

Hope he drops.....long live......me

.TeamOne. 12-23-05 11:37 PM

Leave round one of this tourney, you might as well go fore i pound you
just tourney round and leave... im already wrapped in circles around you
my rhymes stick like peanut butter in them peter pan lunches
i connect lines on michael jackson, homes...and you? you can Neverland punches
This win?..your sure to Potter from this series, in fact...
Sike JK, your raps have me Rowling, now lets get Sirrius, Black
riding round with santa spittin gay rhymes about puttin ppl in fake hearstses
is the ONLY time this HO! HO! HO! ever sleigh verses
i red your previous battles, your dirty laundry has been raided
i can tell you didnt bring your all, cuz on this mic youve been faded

Apo Kold 12-24-05 12:26 AM

All I liked about Blacks verse was

I'm from I.L. your corny lines still amaized me dude
but i'm a walk all over RBK like Jay-z shoes

.. didn't rate much of the rest.

As for Rob, hm.. nothing man. The best lines you had have been flipped WAY better. E.g.

my rhymes stick like peanut butter in them peter pan lunches
i connect lines on michael jackson, homes...and you? you can Neverland punches

this was wasnt good:

Leave round one of this tourney, you might as well go fore i pound you
just tourney round and leave... im already wrapped in circles around you

riding round with santa spittin gay rhymes about puttin ppl in fake hearstses

V/BLACK
is the ONLY time this HO! HO! HO! ever sleigh verses

Young_law 12-24-05 12:39 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Blackmage
I'm from I.L. your corny lines still amaized me dude
but i'm a walk all over RBK like Jay-z shoes
aight punch ......weak concept
lazy fool this battles a sex crime, i'll make sure it gets taped
If i rob killa's i'll end up like you, behind bars gettin raped
you make YOURSELF sound gay in this line
and callin you wack is played, it's been preached from every serminal
you don't even have a rep, how the hell i'm a use a personal
that was jus wack
eavin you terminal, give me a metaphor....somethin
not on your level though, the only that can compare to you...is nothin
hmmmmmmm no
I'm like spul sig, i may be a scrabble freak
I won't KORv, but R'sKO and me leave with the V
good punch

Hope he drops.....long live......me


Quote:
Originally Posted by RobKilla
Leave round one of this tourney, you might as well go fore i pound you
just tourney round and leave... im already wrapped in circles around you
hmm i chuckled nice
my rhymes stick like peanut butter in them peter pan lunches
i connect lines on michael jackson, homes...and you? you can Neverland punches
lol nice coulda been worded better tho
This win?..your sure to Potter from this series, in fact...
Sike JK, your raps have me Rowling, now lets get Sirrius, Black
ROFL NOW THAT WAS FUNNY
riding round with santa spittin gay rhymes about puttin ppl in fake hearstses
is the ONLY time this HO! HO! HO! ever sleigh verses
nope
i red your previous battles, your dirty laundry has been raided
i can tell you didnt bring your all, cuz on this mic youve been faded
kinda played



overall this was a nice battle, but im gonna have to say

v/RobKilla

cuz his punches were better, blackmages were straight, but they werent all that good

KOOL COL-B 12-24-05 01:21 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Blackmage
I'm from I.L. your corny lines still amaized me dude
but i'm a walk all over RBK like Jay-z shoes
lol, nice
lazy fool this battles a sex crime, i'll make sure it gets taped
If i rob killa's i'll end up like you, behind bars gettin raped
not very good punch mang
and callin you wack is played, it's been preached from every serminal
you don't even have a rep, how the hell i'm a use a personal
ehhh
leavin you terminal, give me a metaphor....somethin
not on your level though, the only that can compare to you...is nothin
iznt that a good thang 2 say about him insted of a diss?
I'm like spul sig, i may be a scrabble freak
I won't KORv, but R'sKO and me leave with the V
V?
Hope he drops.....long live......me



Quote:
Originally Posted by RobKilla
Leave round one of this tourney, you might as well go fore i pound you
just tourney round and leave... im already wrapped in circles around you
lmao @ tourney round
my rhymes stick like peanut butter in them peter pan lunches
i connect lines on michael jackson, homes...and you? you can Neverland punches
lol
This win?..your sure to Potter from this series, in fact...
Sike JK, your raps have me Rowling, now lets get Sirrius, Black
haha, koo
riding round with santa spittin gay rhymes about puttin ppl in fake hearstses
is the ONLY time this HO! HO! HO! ever sleigh verses
i dont think theres a t
i red your previous battles, your dirty laundry has been raided
i can tell you didnt bring your all, cuz on this mic youve been faded
lol, theres no mic, lol


V/Robkilla, werd

.Ike. 12-24-05 01:26 AM

uhh yea.....robkilla.....wins...and stuff

TeamOne 12-24-05 11:54 AM

This win?..your sure to Potter from this series, in fact...
Sike JK, your raps have me Rowling, now lets get Sirrius, Black

HOLY SHIT, LMFAO........ that won the battle for me..... that RBK line came real close to tippin the scales, but both of them were consistent, but Rob had alil higher level of consistency, and i feel he won the battle

(i know rob personally, so black, u can asked this to be dqed if u want) but i felt RObkilla took this with the best wordplay ive seen in this tourney so far

.TeamOne. 12-24-05 06:05 PM

yeah, i was tryin to appeal to all tha HP fans in tha house... lol
uppin

J. Luth 12-24-05 09:11 PM

wow, that RBK line and Harry potter line were ill. lol other then that nothin' really. but good battle, ain't gonna vote, too close to call imo. but those two lines were killers

Sean Gunner 12-27-05 01:56 AM

Blackmage
I'm from I.L. your corny lines still amaized me dude
but i'm a walk all over RBK like Jay-z shoes
Eh..punch was ok.
lazy fool this battles a sex crime, i'll make sure it gets taped
If i rob killa's i'll end up like you, behind bars gettin raped
Play of his name was bad.
and callin you wack is played, it's been preached from every serminal
you don't even have a rep, how the hell i'm a use a personal
This was the best punch. Was ok bordering good.
leavin you terminal, give me a metaphor....somethin
not on your level though, the only that can compare to you...is nothin
Eh, bad wording.
I'm like spul sig, i may be a scrabble freak
I won't KORv, but R'sKO and me leave with the V
No.

You had two real punches, one ok, one blah. Just work on better concpts.

RobKilla
Leave round one of this tourney, you might as well go fore i pound you
just tourney round and leave... im already wrapped in circles around you
Played wordplay, and you don't do audio, so ya.
my rhymes stick like peanut butter in them peter pan lunches
i connect lines on michael jackson, homes...and you? you can Neverland punches
Played.
This win?..your sure to Potter from this series, in fact...
Sike JK, your raps have me Rowling, now lets get Sirrius, Black
Eh, wordplay was somewhat witty. But no real punch.
riding round with santa spittin gay rhymes about puttin ppl in fake hearstses
is the ONLY time this HO! HO! HO! ever sleigh verses
No creativity.
i red your previous battles, your dirty laundry has been raided
i can tell you didnt bring your all, cuz on this mic youve been faded
Nah. Bad personal and bad wording.

Really need to work on wording and more original concepts. Wordplay was ok in one spot, but you didn't make a punch.

v- Black

Adam 12-27-05 04:43 AM

Robkilla wins and advances.

Adam 12-27-05 04:44 AM

This battle is closed.


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