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Adam 12-19-05 03:33 AM

28. Invektive vs. 37. GKillaz05
 
Check in by Wednesday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Drop verse by Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.

10 Lines.

No Recycling.
No Biting.
No Feeding.

Good Luck..

Come Dope.

GKillaz05 12-19-05 10:46 AM

checkin' in. Good luck Invektive. Bring the FIRE!

.Ike. 12-19-05 03:53 PM

check....good luck man

GKillaz05 12-22-05 09:14 PM

I'll KO him on RV, so he can really go "down" in history...
Its not a mystery, even 9th Degree picked me for victory...
Good Ol' 'Innocent' Ivektive, first selected to get out witted...
Kid thinks he murder raps but in his case he's always aquitted...
Punches aint hitten "ATT" all, ya comin down like a sunset...
Even if you dial down the center your line still wont connect...
This Loser Is Fakin' Everyday so he doesnt deserve to live...
Punches are like the grinch you always receive and never give...
Invektives not on my level your whack without openin' ya mouth...
Ima "10 your a 4" so once you drop a rap you'll be over n out!...

NEXT!

.Ike. 12-23-05 01:13 PM

Your country is garbage...but i'll be nice since it's this Years Last Quarter
Red and White's Finest? That'd Be A Tough Initiation...If There was a Blue Left Corner
Gkillaz...Son is a Has Been...Ima Put His Tourney Life To an End
Cause he's only seen 'a round two'...when viewing a picture of him and his girlfriend
Gkillaz Is Straight HOMO....Well...I Mean Let's Just Not Pretend
On The Football Field He Plays Reciever....only cause he doesnt have a tight end
Son Could Be A StairMaster...and Prolly Still Would Not Step
Coincidence were Battlin when its 'Almost New Years'..Cause Kids Balls Aint Dropped Yet
I Havent Text Battled in half a year...and wrote this verse in 10 minutes
When Dyselxic Women See u in real life..they're "PopEyes" And They Puke Spinach


Just incase...Popeyes.....eyes pop....dyslexic......ehh

DaTrusHurtz 12-23-05 02:37 PM

I'll KO him on RV, so he can really go "down" in history...
Its not a mystery, even 9th Degree picked me for victory...
okay, so what?
Good Ol' 'Innocent' Ivektive, first selected to get out witted...
Kid thinks he murder raps but in his case he's always aquitted...
cool concept but poorly worded
Punches aint hitten "ATT" all, ya comin down like a sunset...
Even if you dial down the center your line still wont connect...
connect concepts are played
This Loser Is Fakin' Everyday so he doesnt deserve to live...
Punches are like the grinch you always receive and never give...
decent punch here actually
Invektives not on my level your whack without openin' ya mouth...
Ima "10 your a 4" so once you drop a rap you'll be over n out!...
weak statement for a closer, needed to finish stronger

vs.

Your country is garbage...but i'll be nice since it's this Years Last Quarter
Red and White's Finest? That'd Be A Tough Initiation...If There was a Blue Left Corner
okay concept but poorly worded
Gkillaz...Son is a Has Been...Ima Put His Tourney Life To an End
Cause he's only seen 'a round two'...when viewing a picture of him and his girlfriend
haha. pretty funny man, made me laugh
Gkillaz Is Straight HOMO....Well...I Mean Let's Just Not Pretend
On The Football Field He Plays Reciever....only cause he doesnt have a tight end
nah, this was corny and weak
Son Could Be A StairMaster...and Prolly Still Would Not Step
Coincidence were Battlin when its 'Almost New Years'..Cause Kids Balls Aint Dropped Yet
sounds ilke it came from a joke site, kinda weak
I Havent Text Battled in half a year...and wrote this verse in 10 minutes
When Dyselxic Women See u in real life..they're "PopEyes" And They Puke Spinach
I used a popeyes line awhile ago and much better than this

Hmm, close battle, tough to pick a winner here. Two very different styles. GKillaz worded his shit better, but came more simple and played. Invektive came a bit more creative, but most of his shit was weak except for the round two line. I don't know if others will like that round two line, it was kinda corny like a lot of your shit, but for some reason I found it pretty funny, lol. As a whole, I'd also say Invektive came less statementish and got this with consistency.

Vote - Invektive

noname 12-23-05 07:39 PM

I'll KO him on RV, so he can really go "down" in history...
Its not a mystery, even 9th Degree picked me for victory...
...WTF?,Ok..is 9th some almightly god or something?So what if he picked you to win?
Good Ol' 'Innocent' Ivektive, first selected to get out witted...
Kid thinks he murder raps but in his case he's always aquitted...
...No,basic and weak..
Punches aint hitten "ATT" all, ya comin down like a sunset...
Even if you dial down the center your line still wont connect...
...Ok,this was good
This Loser Is Fakin' Everyday so he doesnt deserve to live...
Punches are like the grinch you always receive and never give...
...Good.
Invektives not on my level your whack without openin' ya mouth...
Ima "10 your a 4" so once you drop a rap you'll be over n out!...
..What does opening a mouth have to do with anything?,and punch was gay,

our country is garbage...but i'll be nice since it's this Years Last Quarter
Red and White's Finest? That'd Be A Tough Initiation...If There was a Blue Left Corner
..not feelin it
Gkillaz...Son is a Has Been...Ima Put His Tourney Life To an End
Cause he's only seen 'a round two'...when viewing a picture of him and his girlfriend
...Good
Gkillaz Is Straight HOMO....Well...I Mean Let's Just Not Pretend
On The Football Field He Plays Reciever....only cause he doesnt have a tight end
...Decent
Son Could Be A StairMaster...and Prolly Still Would Not Step
Coincidence were Battlin when its 'Almost New Years'..Cause Kids Balls Aint Dropped Yet
....Dope
I Havent Text Battled in half a year...and wrote this verse in 10 minutes
When Dyselxic Women See u in real life..they're "PopEyes" And They Puke Spinach
....Ok

Ivektive wins...Gkillaz came with some dumb shit.Like that 9th degree line. :wtf:

v/Invekt.


Even tho Gkillz will prolly complain about this being hate :rolleyes:

Ryan Hughes 12-23-05 07:57 PM

I'll KO him on RV, so he can really go "down" in history...
Its not a mystery, even 9th Degree picked me for victory...
^^^no....that opener was weak
Good Ol' 'Innocent' Ivektive, first selected to get out witted...
Kid thinks he murder raps but in his case he's always aquitted...
^^^ight...
Punches aint hitten "ATT" all, ya comin down like a sunset...
Even if you dial down the center your line still wont connect...
^^^Played
This Loser Is Fakin' Everyday so he doesnt deserve to live...
Punches are like the grinch you always receive and never give...
^^^Good
Invektives not on my level your whack without openin' ya mouth...
Ima "10 your a 4" so once you drop a rap you'll be over n out!...
^^^Nice closer


Your country is garbage...but i'll be nice since it's this Years Last Quarter
Red and White's Finest? That'd Be A Tough Initiation...If There was a Blue Left Corner
^^^Good opener..
Gkillaz...Son is a Has Been...Ima Put His Tourney Life To an End
Cause he's only seen 'a round two'...when viewing a picture of him and his girlfriend
^^^Lol....that was good
Gkillaz Is Straight HOMO....Well...I Mean Let's Just Not Pretend
On The Football Field He Plays Reciever....only cause he doesnt have a tight end
^^^Nice
Son Could Be A StairMaster...and Prolly Still Would Not Step
Coincidence were Battlin when its 'Almost New Years'..Cause Kids Balls Aint Dropped Yet
^^^Ight
I Havent Text Battled in half a year...and wrote this verse in 10 minutes
When Dyselxic Women See u in real life..they're "PopEyes" And They Puke Spinach
^^^Lol....nice closer

V/Invektive.....this was an ight battle...i think Gkillaz came wit some played punchs..an wordplay....work on that....invek came wit a good verse that had some funny punchs...it was consistent...he gets the win...

Apo Kold 12-23-05 10:25 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by GKillaz05
I'll KO him on RV, so he can really go "down" in history...
Its not a mystery, even 9th Degree picked me for victory...
Even though this is the beginning so many people will use the concept of mentioning the predicitins as a punch. Not fresh.

Good Ol' 'Innocent' Ivektive, first selected to get out witted...
Kid thinks he murder raps but in his case he's always aquitted...
Was ok

Punches aint hitten "ATT" all, ya comin down like a sunset...
Even if you dial down the center your line still wont connect...
This concept has been done better & too many times before

This Loser Is Fakin' Everyday so he doesnt deserve to live...
Punches are like the grinch you always receive and never give...
A lil simple

Invektives not on my level your whack without openin' ya mouth...
Ima "10 your a 4" so once you drop a rap you'll be over n out!...
Hm.. not bad

Your wording just seemed off & some stuff wasn't too original.

NEXT!


Quote:
Originally Posted by Invektive
Your country is garbage...but i'll be nice since it's this Years Last Quarter
Red and White's Finest? That'd Be A Tough Initiation...If There was a Blue Left Corner
OK

Gkillaz...Son is a Has Been...Ima Put His Tourney Life To an End
Cause he's only seen 'a round two'...when viewing a picture of him and his girlfriend
:laugh2: good

Gkillaz Is Straight HOMO....Well...I Mean Let's Just Not Pretend
On The Football Field He Plays Reciever....only cause he doesnt have a tight end
Nah

Son Could Be A StairMaster...and Prolly Still Would Not Step
Coincidence were Battlin when its 'Almost New Years'..Cause Kids Balls Aint Dropped Yet
Played concept

I Havent Text Battled in half a year...and wrote this verse in 10 minutes
When Dyselxic Women See u in real life..they're "PopEyes" And They Puke Spinach
OK


Overall I'm going to have to go with Inv.. in this battle. Inv.. next time come with witty stuff on level with the 'round 2' line throughtout your verse & you should kill it.

Magic5 12-23-05 10:34 PM

Nothing

vs.

Gkillaz...Son is a Has Been...Ima Put His Tourney Life To an End
Cause he's only seen 'a round two'...when viewing a picture of him and his girlfriend

I've used that around - a round wordplay before, but the wordplay you did it with was different. Gkillaz just didn't bring any quotables. His shit was either played or worded into a statement.

Vote - Ike

TeamOne 12-24-05 11:22 AM

v/invek, even tho i used a "ball drops/New Years" wordplay on u in my diss.......u came harder, G Killaz coulda won with better wording on his "murder rap" and ur closer...... ur grinch line was actually kinda nice, but u made it soooooooo simplistic......ehhh

Adam 12-27-05 05:21 AM

Invektive whored and won. Cool


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