Feelings Torn
 

These feelings prick like thorns
I feel like I ain't been born
My lifes just been scattered
I feel like everything is shattered

Everything I lived for has been taken away from me
I wish that I could exchange my life with somebody
Sometimes I feel like this world is to much for me to bare
When there's people in this world who do not care
Like my family ignore my existance i Grew down
Just feel like a clown getting hit when i walk around
I suffer from depression and got real bad agression
All i want is a little bit of love and feel a bit of effection
But I'm feeling beat down from everyone spraying stuff
Lifes been more then tough man it's been rough
You must take me for a joke cuz you treat me like this
I'm bleading inside of me clenching hard holding my fists
Why do you run me down u must wanna make me more a mess
I try to ignore the rest cuz im tired of you you make me depressed
I'm just circling in the same direction and it's boring me to see
That my life could turn upside down I think how could this be
Why would i recive pain thats feels like someone taking ya soul
n You'll never be happy but just be somewhere dark in a hole

I liked the vocab and emotion in this...

...you shoulda made it longer cause you were really onto something here.

Good job tho. :thumbup:

alrite thanks if I see any of ur open mics I will drop feed and thanks for the love.

its me agin bored as a muthafucka wit shit else 2 do n duunno wut 2 do make sense?...n e ways good drop again though this n da las 1 shoulda went 2getha seeing there the same topic basically i feel ur pain trust me but all u can do is like 2 pac said keep ya head up
keep postin nigga peace