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Tech (banned) 12-22-05 02:06 PM

Someone Tell Me
 
Hook
Can someone please tell me why we cry at night
hopin for a better life on the other side
Can someone please tell me why we hope for better days
on top of grave, wondering why we live this way
Can someone please tell me why none us of know
why we live in place were immaturity never grows
Can someone please tell me why we look up at the sky
hopin that, that one person can open our eyes

Verse 1
I'm looking for a place were we guide out our prisoners
invision a place were rappers can write out to listeners
and were back alley victims aren't caged into dungeons
steel knifes bringin' more tears than blades of onions
and in case we runnin' for this place once invisioned by pac
drop the guns, empty barrels with rolls of drums, the missions locked
we flash money, cars, and fame, but still rock diseases
so we never rest in peace cause our soul will rot in pieces
see if we let go of the barrels and settle cause we need this
and not only in the bad times come searchin for jesus
hold the bible when we're scare but then it sits on the shelf
collecting dust and we wondering why we living in hell
and due to the facts our bones snap and we walk with canes
since there's no coupon so save us from this excrutiating pain

Hook x2
Can someone please tell me why we cry at night
hopin for a better life on the other side
Can someone please tell me why we hope for better days
on top of grave, wondering why we live this way
Can someone please tell me why none us of know
why we live in place were immaturity never grows
Can someone please tell me why we look up at the sky
hopin that, that one person can open our eyes

Verse 2
It's a paradise, hence the lies, were we can rest our eyes
directions lie by your side and realize heaven never dies
cause the bullets and calibers with strokin' hollows
fill the broken bottles on role models that we hope to swallow
and forget and leave in the past, gasp and breath at last
to fast to me to grasp, but together we can lead the mass
and get past this, let the shells and barrels hit the cement
cause once we're done the world will knod in agreement
see this goes out to those mothers who broke their back
without a husband, took the love and gave it strokes of black
cause we wishin for a place when we can change our own
remove the silence of violence and make this place a home

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Tech (banned) 12-24-05 09:31 PM

uppin for feedback....................................

Kawn Flixx 12-26-05 02:20 PM

Word this was pretty dope i was FEELING IT YOU HAD NICE WORDPLAY GOOD IMAGERY AND EMOTIONS GOING INTO YOUR DROP..(sorry for the caps im tipsy as hel; :)) but yeah overall i was really feeling this nice job.


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