Step Dad
 

O step dad why won't you die
I can't take it when you lie
I wanna stick a needle in ur eye
For all the times you made me cry
Your a person I really really hate
I hope this song tempts ur fate
cuz im sick to death of you
I'ma give you the verbal abuse
Your just here to annoy me
all u do is just sit n watch tv
Your fat ass is just a joke
inside I wanna leave u choked
I really hate listening to ur face
why don't you move from our place
Cuz you ain't really wanted here
You've made me wanna kill u this year
I ain't gonnna make myself tear
over someone thats just a queer
You should really watch dat mouth
B4 I tear your adams apple out
I hate breathing the same air
I really dont give one care
But when you make me dispair
I'ma tear up up which is only fair
Don't ever try to talk down
cuz ur sounding like a clown
And don't ever call me any names
I'm sick n tired of your games

fuckin pussy

basic rhyme scheme, boring actually to read because it wasn't deep enough, i think that you could have worked on the topic more by going into depth and improving your rhyme scheme.......

Really simple and really boring. Didn't change it up at all, and just kinda is like...ok. I feel I could have written this, which means the emotion is bad cuz I don't even have a step dad.

lol @ ur suckage

fuck you..................................

heh...NOW he wants to get creative....

You want him to die,but you won't kill him..

And you call him pussy?

You gay :nono:

natural killer i think everyone on this site thinks ur gay so don't call me it that word suits ya better. why don't you shit off and die cuz you bore me.

word on that^^

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I Agree U Could Of Done Better With Type Of Song But I Feel Ya Though I Hated My Step Dad...so I Kicked Him Out The House..then Spent Oru Rent Money N We Got Evicted...then My Mom Chose Him Over Me N Left Me 4 The Streets So Now I Feel The Same 4 Both Of Them