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CapZ 12-24-05 02:21 AM

Dios vs CapZ
 
Battle Rules:

6 Bars
No Crew Votes

No Recycling/Feedin/Flips

No Biting

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-24-05 at 02:51 AM

Must drop verse in 200 minutes after check in.

System 12-24-05 02:21 AM

CapZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-05 02:21 AM.

System 12-24-05 02:24 AM

Dios has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-05 02:24 AM.

Dios 12-24-05 02:28 AM

I said 6 Linez which is 3 bars not 6 barz...but oh well here is my verse.....

So you have the same name of fake bullets for toy guns(1)
so dis must mean i can pull your string and watch this boy run(2)

like your rap game your accuracy is wack(3), so he resorts to bats
ill give u a hammer and sprite tops and u still couldnt bust CAPZ

matta fact, the only way you ownin up to your name is lookin at your keyboard and pressin CAPS
and all that does is add emphasis to the lyrical words that you lack

EXPLANATIONS:
(1) Those cap guns you can buy that just make noise
(2) Stayin on the toy topic saying he like a pull-string doll
(3) Playin off his name Capz/bullets and accuracy of a gun

CapZ 12-24-05 04:32 AM

ight 3 barz then key'd



Mann At Text.. I'll Be Collapsin Ur Spine N Vertebraes So Watch When I DROP YA NECK
N Faggot Ur NOT THA BEST! Like Peelin Off Dios Face I'll Rearrange Ya JAW N FLESH!! 1
He Flows? I Dont Think So..Cuz I'ma Put A End To Ya Horoscope Like Lossin With LEOS
N Fo Real.. I Wont Even Diss U Cuz Just Readin Ya Unspelled Name Tells Me U'll Never
Get A DEAL/DIO!! 2

~::
Fucka I'ma SEE YO'R ABBS RIP! N Like Gluin Tape To Ya Verse I Doubt HE'LL W/RAP IT!!
Cuz Bitch..Aint Like D's Gonna Go Over Tha Scale Seein As Ya Just BELOW AVERAGE!! 3


Gyea!!..

1- metas/multies..
2- metas/multies.. lil nameplay..
3- D's.,And F's Below average ya know.. nameplay

VOTES

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CapZ 12-24-05 04:34 AM

ight 3 barz then key'd




Mann At Text.. I'll Be Collapsin Ur Spine N Vertebraes So Watch When I DROP YA NECK
N Faggot Ur NOT THA BEST! Like Peelin Off Dios Face I'll Rearrange Ya JAW N FLESH!! 1
He Flows? I Dont Think So..Cuz I'ma Put A End To Ya Horoscope Like Lossin With LEOS
N Fo Real.. I Wont Even Diss U Cuz Just Readin Ya Unspelled Name Tells Me U'll Never
Get A DEAL/DIO!! 2

~::
Fucka I'ma SEE YO'R ABBS RIP! N Like Gluin Tape To Ya Verse I Doubt HE'LL W/RAP IT!!
Cuz Bitch..Aint Like D's Gonna Go Over Tha Scale Seein As Ya Just BELOW AVERAGE!! 3



Gyea!!..

1- metas/multies..
2- metas/multies.. lil nameplay..
3- D's.,And F's Below average ya know.. nameplay

CapZ 12-24-05 05:17 AM

Categories
Consistency/Structure:
Creativity:
Enjoyable:
Flow:
Metaphors:
Multies:
Personal:
Punches:
Vocabulary:
Wordplay:
Overall:

UPPIN.. And sorry bout tha 2nd post.. tha 1st one tha real one still they're tha same

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Dios 12-24-05 09:22 AM

^^the 2 posts after your first original verse no one will be able to see....like when they click on our battle all they will see is our 2 verses...they wont see any of this talkin we are doing after we dropped our verses....and when they vote then they will be able to see all this

Dios 12-24-05 11:38 AM

uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin...

D.Zaster 12-24-05 12:19 PM

Voted For: Dios

Weak battle.

I got:


No quotables

Vs

No quotables


But Dios was better.
Other dude was toooooooo streeeeetched.

So Dios won on strucuter and punches.

V/dios

CapZ 12-24-05 02:14 PM

how so? i had almost every category,lol and BREAK IT DOWN WITH CATEGORIES..0-0 uppin

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Kamze 12-24-05 02:34 PM

Voted For: Dios

v/ Dios

So you have the same name of fake bullets for toy guns(1)
so dis must mean i can pull your string and watch this boy run(2)

4/10- ok punch/personal could have been worded better to hit harder.

like your rap game your accuracy is wack(3), so he resorts to bats
ill give u a hammer and sprite tops and u still couldnt bust CAPZ

4/10- nice nameplay and personal.

matta fact, the only way you ownin up to your name is lookin at your keyboard and pressin CAPS
and all that does is add emphasis to the lyrical words that you lack

5/10- your best line this was pretty ill, but could have been worded better to be ILL!!!!.

Overall - 13/30

Mann At Text.. I'll Be Collapsin Ur Spine N Vertebraes So Watch When I DROP YA NECK
N Faggot Ur NOT THA BEST! Like Peelin Off Dios Face I'll Rearrange Ya JAW N FLESH!! 1

2/10 - Meh, not really feelin it abit basic

He Flows? I Dont Think So..Cuz I'ma Put A End To Ya Horoscope Like Lossin With LEOS
N Fo Real.. I Wont Even Diss U Cuz Just Readin Ya Unspelled Name Tells Me U'll Never
Get A DEAL/DIO!! 2

2/10 - dio and deal don't really sound the same unless you strees it.

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Fucka I'ma SEE YO'R ABBS RIP! N Like Gluin Tape To Ya Verse I Doubt HE'LL W/RAP IT!!
Cuz Bitch..Aint Like D's Gonna Go Over Tha Scale Seein As Ya Just BELOW AVERAGE!! 3

4/10 - you saved your best line for last, this was pretty good but didn't really hit hard.

Overall - 8/30

So voted for dios cause his punches and personal were just more wittier than caps,
But still a ok battle.

Daubs 12-24-05 02:52 PM

This was feedback posted for CapZ
 
I feel sick .

Dios 12-25-05 12:15 AM

uppin on christmas day yall.....merry christmas Capz

GKillaz05 12-25-05 09:57 PM

Voted For: CapZ

CapZ:
Mann At Text.. I'll Be Collapsin Ur Spine N Vertebraes So Watch When I DROP YA NECK
N Faggot Ur NOT THA BEST! Like Peelin Off Dios Face I'll Rearrange Ya JAW N FLESH!! 1
2/10 - pretty bad line.
He Flows? I Dont Think So..Cuz I'ma Put A End To Ya Horoscope Like Lossin With LEOS
N Fo Real.. I Wont Even Diss U Cuz Just Readin Ya Unspelled Name Tells Me U'll Never
Get A DEAL/DIO!! 2
6/10 - Good Personal.

~::
Fucka I'ma SEE YO'R ABBS RIP! N Like Gluin Tape To Ya Verse I Doubt HE'LL W/RAP IT!!
Cuz Bitch..Aint Like D's Gonna Go Over Tha Scale Seein As Ya Just BELOW AVERAGE!! 3
3/10 - ok diss.
11/30
You had a good verse, it flowed well. You had strong punches and your personals where hitten hard.


Dios:
So you have the same name of fake bullets for toy guns(1)
so dis must mean i can pull your string and watch this boy run(2)
1/10 - BAD.

like your rap game your accuracy is wack(3), so he resorts to bats
ill give u a hammer and sprite tops and u still couldnt bust CAPZ
3/10 - Ok.

matta fact, the only way you ownin up to your name is lookin at your keyboard and pressin CAPS
and all that does is add emphasis to the lyrical words that you lack
4/10 - meh.
8/30

Vote - CapZ

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