D.Zaster vs Ill Technique
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

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Ill Technique has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-05 06:46 PM.

D.Zaster has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-24-05 06:48 PM.

bitch you can try ya best, but i'll stab you if you rap it hard
since everythings personal to you, ^ i hope you take that to heart
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Im too far apart, rappin hard to leave you exposed bitch
Your window of oppurtunity was open...till i hit the X and closed it
fuckin wack shit, Bitch D`s pleasing this crowed
Cos Y`all know If I pull this bitches string...a tampon`ll pop out
You got no clout,and its obvious Ill`s shit lacks
But congrats on being the first dude with lines longer than six flags
Your crews wack as fuck, E-styles comin with retaliations
Cos we all know C.S is only dope... When it comes to makin animations



for those that dont know, CS is the animation part of photoshop.
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He's A Disaster, No Wonder He's Droppin Tragedies Here
Since An Elf's Got A Higher Chance At Havin A Good Wrapping Career
You Need Your Crew To Win, Since There's No I In D.Zaster
But When They're Gone And You Step U......
.......Everyone Breaks Out In Laughter
I'll Hand You A Lump Of Coal For Christmas To Help Build A Spark
You Try To Blend Everyone's Style.....And Find Yourself Ripped Apart
I'll Breaks Your Bars Faster Than Fat Kids To Make You D.Z. [for the idiots, dizzy]
So You Can Use It As An Excuse.......
For Posting More Disasters Than The Ones In Ya Siggy
I'll Place Another Period At The End Of Your Name, Make You Twice The Bitch
Cause You Further Under My Border Than A Chicken, Bean And Rice Mix!

uppin this thread for votes..........................

This was feedback posted for Ill Technique
 

you both had not very good structure
but you got this easssyyyy

Hop off

and lol @ you thinking that.

we will see

thanks for the feed willa......any votes.....................?

This was feedback posted for D.Zaster
 

Checking this out..........................................

well can you check it out and vote.................

Voted For: D.Zaster

ahhh damn..this shit was nice.... lol i liked the cs line...that cracked me...up..overall i belive D ZASTER HAd better lines....simple and plain had better punches and better multies.....but ill if you used less of those fake punchline set up lines it'd be decent..but overall i just felt that d.zaster had come a lil bit better..and the only one that was semi-funny was the last two lines of D zasters....soo overall D gets my vote

V/D.Zaster

what! whatever, anymore votes...........................

This was feedback posted for D.Zaster
 

d.zaster owned in this, i believe...punches were witty and creative....i'm going to be, remind me tomorrow and i'll drop a real vote

Up for votes.

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