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First: Whats with the voice? Sounds put on. But if you ignore that, flow is pretty nice. Delivery is good also. Lyrics are sound. My suggestion is working on breath control, since your cadence doesnt sound quite up to par... and do something about that voice -_-

Second: Adlibs take away from the sound of the verse. I see the kind of sound you were after with them, but maybe just turn their vol. down a little but more. Besides that, I liked your voice and flow, lyrics, etc I have nothing to complain about.

Third: Sick presence... Probably the best delivery out of all 3. Flow was most definitely on point and the voice went well with the beat... nice style. The only negative thing I noticed is that when breaths are taken, theyre really loud... That can be fixed during the mixing stages of a track though.

Overall was a nice track.

good lookin' out brutha. thanks much.

oner...


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