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Phase.One 12-28-05 04:51 AM

When My Squad Is Around (Xkwizit, Phase, and JStreetz
 
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218051

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218003


www.soundclick.com/lphaseonel

same order as in the title

GeDa Beast 12-28-05 03:22 PM

the beat is tight
the chorus is aiiigh
its not wack


the first dude
ehh, not feelin his verse too much
I dont like his rap style or voice...

chorus again

2nd verse
likin the rhyme scheme
alot of ill lines, so far the best in the song
delivery was ill


j-streets
so far Im hearin alot of ill lines
lol @ the ricky right before the sats
that was dope as fuck
im likin this

overall the whole track was tight, 1st dude came in kind of weak, phase picked up the pace though and j streets kept it goin.
good shit

J. Luth 12-28-05 07:27 PM

aiight peeping....

hook, shit's pretty nice... catchy.... prolly up the vol on it tho. but shit nice. dope ass beat

first verse,
flow aiight, quality ehh, he not bad, jus not the greatest. Shit's ok...... not bad though had some lyrics here and there... overall, not bad

second verse,
this phase haha.... flow ill, dope multi's. damn, lovin' the flow wit the multi's. you got dope delivery. ill fo reel. loving this... ill lyrics.... wow, jus all dope shit. loved it. killed that shit.

Third verse,
Ain't realyl feeling his delivery too much, but dude got some nice lines, some played, some dope ones. But overall dude going good. good flow.. SAT's line nice haha..... but overall nice..


OVerall, this was real nice track. Enjoyed this a lot. good shit. Phase killed this shit and put it in the casket and shitted on it. ~_~ lol but yea, really liked this shit. good shit. e-style rep. word. 9/10 stay up. pc. one.

Shawn Phillips 12-28-05 09:59 PM

verse1- not bad, flows coo, delivery coo..nice drop
verse2- ahh phase stop mkain other ppl look bad on tracks lmao..
verse3- pretty nice too. i dont liek your voice but other then that and ure quality its dope..
hook- dope i was feelin it

iamthatdude87 12-28-05 10:40 PM

the song as a whole i really liked it camne out nicee..

first verse: decent drop flow was there coulda been better wit more emotion
2nd verse was really nice delvery flow emotion everything was there gud shit
third verse was nice too i like hes flow he was real grimy gud shit

Phase.One 12-29-05 01:19 AM

thanks alot to all yall na mean an shawn stfu lol i am strartin to do that anit i???

B To The D 12-29-05 01:08 PM

Aigth Beats Nice

Hooks Koo

1st Dude:

Flows Nice..

Dleivery Koo Could Be Upped

Emotinos Aight

Lyrics Are Ncie

Presence Is Koo

Flow Get A Lil Off

Hook Again

Phase:
Flows Nice,Stays On

Emotinos Koo

Deliverys Koo

I Like YOur Presence YOu Seem Real Confident On It

Work On Your Breath Control A Lil

Lyrics Koo

Hook Again

3rd Cat:

Flows:Aight Falls off A Lil

Delivrys:Koo Could Be Better

Lyrics Nice Lol @HIV Line

Emotions Koo

Quals Aight


Overall:8/10

Rtf On :http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218338

L. Veracity 12-30-05 02:50 AM

definetly up the volume on the hook my nigga P...the words on it are tyte though...beat's sikk as hell duke

XkwiZit, ya verse was aiight, not feelin' ya voice and your quality is clear but sounds boxy...verse was pretty good though my niggarachie

P-1, you said your flow got sikker and you were correct, I like ya skraight up flow better than ya choppy flow style before...definetly fits you better cuz you use a lottah multies, verse was sikk my nigga, 100% fiya

J Skreetz, dis nigga voice is def new to me, diggin' it like graves though...lyrics are G fuh riLLa duke...gudda steez, ya name certainly fits you haha...damn @ dish out more cash than a ATM, hahahaa

hott track here ya'll...niggas need to stop sleepin' cuz ya'll ain't seen Phase on here much...be lucky he's here cuz he's among the best ONLINE overall and period and he doesn't collab with trashy niggas

GeDa Beast 12-30-05 02:59 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by L. Veracity
definetly up the volume on the hook my nigga P...the words on it are tyte though...beat's sikk as hell duke

XkwiZit, ya verse was aiight, not feelin' ya voice and your quality is clear but sounds boxy...verse was pretty good though my niggarachie

P-1, you said your flow got sikker and you were correct, I like ya skraight up flow better than ya choppy flow style before...definetly fits you better cuz you use a lottah multies, verse was sikk my nigga, 100% fiya

J Skreetz, dis nigga voice is def new to me, diggin' it like graves though...lyrics are G fuh riLLa duke...gudda steez, ya name certainly fits you haha...damn @ dish out more cash than a ATM, hahahaa

hott track here ya'll...niggas need to stop sleepin' cuz ya'll ain't seen Phase on here much...be lucky he's here cuz he's among the best ONLINE overall and period and he doesn't collab with trashy niggas

word, thats why he writin and recordin some shit for me, RIGHT NOW
:THUMBUP:
biish


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