Airplane | Babble-on ft. Shawn Phillips |
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218308
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218172

ok this doods dope, babble-ons unfinished track now finished.
holla @ ya boys

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3293355

WHY THE FUCK IS NO ONE FEEDING!

uppin!

Wtf Feeed Ppl Uppin!

probably cuz when u click on the damn link it freezes ur computer up


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there we go

workin now

beat is fine


likin the flow mostly...kinda jerky in spots


Hook isn't bad at all


2nd verse...lyrics are cool

this is a str8 piece dawg

nothin major one way or the other



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*listenin* this is the first track ive heard from u

pretty good quality..... intro is aight.... im likin the beat...

first verse was pretty good... good presence.... quality is nice.... u had a decent flow and lyrics were nice

Hook is crazy... really feelin it... nice

Second verse is good also, but i think the first person fit better on the track.... both had decent lyrics..... damn, not likin the second hook... first person should do that part.... sorry but u cant sing that well, needa work on that

besides the very end this track is one of the better ones ive heard on RV.... this is good enough for mixtape/LP if u fix the endin alil

lol werd thx

upiiin

vhekcin


beats nicee

hmm....

u r comin on

flows nice

delibvrys solid

qualitys koo

presence is nice,seem very confident

lyrics are dope

WOoop to this hook shits dope
singing is dopppppppppppppppppppppppe!!!!!!!

Second cat

flows good

delvierys koo

lyrics aight

presence koo,1st dudes better tho

lol@2nd hook


overall:8/10

rtf:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218839