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please close also
re recording with better quality
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aight i got you
First Verse - Ya flwo is nice as hell.. but i dont think your saying anything to much.. you know ? if you had more meaningful lyrics i think you would be a nice head .. just spit whats real man.. what ever is you spit.. i got the impression you were going for the hard edge and shit.. and for some reason iunno if thats you =/ .. but for real.. ya flow is nice.. i love fast flow thats actually hit some kind of rhythm and works.. just work on more creative and original lyrics.. not a bad drop.. decent actually.. keep droppin man.. |
werd thanx fer tha feed and ill take that advise .............................bump
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bump bump.....................
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Aighh
beats nice delvierys koo Flows good acutally emotion need a lil uppin qualitys bad tho lol lyrics are aiggghh,should be upped hook should stand out though:( 2nd verse im feelin much more lol i dunno y deliverys better shiiittt i cant believe u new to audio loool You elevating really well!!! Overall:7/10 keep the fucc up!! rtf:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218839 |
the flow was good and the emotion fit that type of song.lyrics could have been better but to me the song just should have been longer then it was i mean i know you were rapping fast but another 3 or 4 bars couldnt of hurt the song only make it better. yeah i would give that 7/10.
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werd yall thanx fer tha feed uppin thius
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yo dont u hate that fuckin line by line feed lol anywayz my man got good flow i de like to see how u would be on a story tellin track lettin ya mind free to just wander on a beat man ,.......find that beat that makes u feel like holy shit i have to spit on this and ya best music comes from it
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