clab back remix(hot shit for only my third track)must peep
 

i was feelin this beat so much when i listened toit shit started popin in my head so i was like damn have to hop on this shit so enjoi id say its prolly my best yet
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check it yall sleepin or sum shit no one rtf these dayz

Listening:

Liking the beat:Flow is aight but falls on in parts. Lyrics are aight. Presence could be a bit better. quality is aight but could be up'd.Emotion is a bit blah but w/e!
But why the beat go on for SOOOOOOO long at the end?!
aight track mate

keep it up!

yeah stop it after tha talkin i forgot to cut it off lmao my bad yall

i love this beat...flows dope it really aint that bad...the lyrics are defitnly dope aint lacking but theres never no such thing as perfect so keep shining those skillz playa...the hook is ight can be more catchy and have a lil more effort put inta it..but other than that this is a decent track....id give this a 8.5/10 keep lettin that shit pour outta u playa....im out pc

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da beat is hot but like Mad K said u do start to fall off
but u was flowing pretty good but the thing u need to me
was some emotion, u need to put some power into ya
voice but ovarall its decent

yea...beat is hot...go JA!


1st off...amp vocals


heard some clicks...


flow sounds good


delivery is acceptable


not a bad drop homie


good


1

voice is ok,flow is iight..lyrics is good...decent drop man...maby up ur vocals a bit..ur use a noise reduct..

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I LOVE THIS BEAT:D::D:D

Flows nice,falls off al il

you ridin it well

delivrys koo

damn u only done a few tracks *Impreseed*

emotions koo,needs uppin a lil

Lyrics kooo


I dont feel the hook

2nd verse

flow seems upped

delvierys more comfortable,yup yup!!

Word

fcuk your hook:)

overall:7/10

*Downloads*

weeerd

Dont really like the clap back beat...flow is aight...delivery is decent EQ ya vocals betta...lyrics is str8...dunno maybe just amp up ya vocals more...keep it up.

-uNo-

Yea Beat's Nice Yo Fuck Yea, Flow Was Pretty Good Rhyme Scheme Was Meh, I Also Heard A Few Clicks But It Aint A Thing Man, Drop Was Nice Man Delivery Came Well, Vocals Was Good , Keep It Up Home Boy

werd uppin this yall thanx fer tha feed

werd thanx line was...........
no gimiicks just image plus a style to match
and tha money u got...i got more in my hats
werdizzle