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niquenique773 01-04-06 10:56 PM

moral vs niquenique773
 
Battle Rules:

6 bars a.k.a 12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R
u spit first

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-07-06 at 10:56 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 01-04-06 10:57 PM

Moral has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-04-06 10:57 PM.

System 01-04-06 11:00 PM

niquenique773 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-04-06 11:00 PM.

Moral 01-04-06 11:16 PM

Listen

3 Day's To Spit, 3 Ways Of Shit, Best Describes Your Verse
Since Kanye Entered, You Potrait Him, I Guess Chi's A First
You'll Kneel In Defeat, When I Prevail To Say Your Weak
Want To Be Christ? So I Continue Putting Nails In Your Feet
Your Status Aint Avaialable, Your Challenge Is Six Bars
Cause You Seeing A Win Is Like, Parapalegics Fixing Cars
Abide By The Prophecies, Your Bound To Get A Loss
I'm Slowing You Down Quicker Then Ladies In Metapause
Your Studder Riffict, Your Name's In Repeat For Double Play
Freshmeet, At Death's Feet, The Perdicament Is Double Pay
Your On Your Own It's Timeless, For Me It Fly's By Don
Newbie, Whack, Gay, And Still Crewless...............
....................................Moral Proved His Point I'm Gone

Fuck Little Quick Shit Still Rusty

niquenique773 01-04-06 11:29 PM

yea dis is da kid first battle on dis site//
and bout blow his ass out lik 2 dikes//

damn a nigga jus caught writers block dats a bitch//
but i dont need a rain 2 beat moral jus 2 lips//

nigga theres alot of reasons da call me ''dominoe''//
cuz i take one shot and down yo whole block go//

30 feet away i got a pistol shot lik kobe or lebron//
30 minuted imma b in ur girl draws like a tampon//

boi i should of prayed for da trojan or life style condom//
cuz u would be broke cuz child support from me wont go 2 ur moma//

nigga dis battle was jus like a fairy tell story//
dont fuck wit me or you'll get killed is da moral,homie//

niquenique773 01-04-06 11:34 PM

i ment 3 write brain not rain in da second bar

trakk*star 01-04-06 11:38 PM

Voted For: Moral

nice drop punches were dope vocab was kinda low but it flowed ight for text and coo structure ninique u talked bout stuff irellavent to a battle not many personals in either verse
for text this was a decent battle but moral got this due to lack of punches by ninuque rtf on my song clap back remix or this vote will be removed cause no one returns favours

Tech (banned) 01-05-06 02:58 PM

Voted For: Moral

Although Both Were Pretty Weak, I have To Say Moral got This Dues To The Fact He Had Actual Punches, Unlike The Other Guy......RTF In My Battle Against technique

jr freeze 01-05-06 03:01 PM

Voted For: Moral

ea dis is da kid first battle on dis site//
and bout blow his ass out lik 2 dikes//
^^^Weak
damn a nigga jus caught writers block dats a bitch//
but i dont need a rain 2 beat moral jus 2 lips//
^^^weak
nigga theres alot of reasons da call me ''dominoe''//
cuz i take one shot and down yo whole block go//
Weak
30 feet away i got a pistol shot lik kobe or lebron//
30 minuted imma b in ur girl draws like a tampon//
Ight
boi i should of prayed for da trojan or life style condom//
cuz u would be broke cuz child support from me wont go 2 ur moma//
^^^No
nigga dis battle was jus like a fairy tell story//
dont fuck wit me or you'll get killed is da moral,homie//
ight


3 Day's To Spit, 3 Ways Of Shit, Best Describes Your Verse
Since Kanye Entered, You Potrait Him, I Guess Chi's A First
^^^good opener
You'll Kneel In Defeat, When I Prevail To Say Your Weak
Want To Be Christ? So I Continue Putting Nails In Your Feet
^^^Ight
Your Status Aint Avaialable, Your Challenge Is Six Bars
Cause You Seeing A Win Is Like, Parapalegics Fixing Cars
^^^Good
Abide By The Prophecies, Your Bound To Get A Loss
I'm Slowing You Down Quicker Then Ladies In Metapause
^^^Good
Your Studder Riffict, Your Name's In Repeat For Double Play
Freshmeet, At Death's Feet, The Perdicament Is Double Pay
^^^Ight
Your On Your Own It's Timeless, For Me It Fly's By Don
Newbie, Whack, Gay, And Still Crewless...............
....................................Moral Proved His Point I'm Gone
Good closer


this was a one sided battle...niq came wit played punchs that were weak...no hate...moral u came wit some solid lines that got u my vote

.:Mike Check:. 01-05-06 03:41 PM

This was feedback posted for niquenique773
 
Damn yo fuckin Moral tore your ass up...fuckin whored...actually he did more than fuckin whore you...damn yo he made you his fuckin bitch...Yo but for real though...you fuckin suck(niquenique773)...Ha, im not even that good and i would still kill you...Well i cant say im not good, im more like average but thats irrelevant...anyway, im not gon vote cuz this will be over soon anyway...My vote wouldve been for moral though, obliviously...anyway, get at me...holla...1

Red Stroke 01-06-06 12:33 AM

This was feedback posted for niquenique773
 
Checking This Shit Out Wot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Houdini 01-13-06 02:56 AM

Voted For: Moral

You killed it with this right here
You'll Kneel In Defeat, When I Prevail To Say Your Weak
Want To Be Christ? So I Continue Putting Nails In Your Feet
<<<Nice punch and structure.

Other guy....You might wanna fina new carreer cuz whackness just went down 300 more points.....Noe the rest of the rejects will thank you


No hate Just raw emotion Homie

Critic 01-16-06 07:40 AM

Voted For: Moral

Moral ~ Dam rip that other kid apart ha ha, flow was
well on pont, nice rhyming, pretty decent vocab.
Punches hit really hard. I don't need to explain any
more you won this easy nice verse fams.

Niq ~ Your verse was pretty poor son u really need
to elevate, flowed alright but that was it really.
Didn't have any punches or personals what else can
I say.

Moral won this battle with ease with the opener
alone.

Stay up both

1~


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