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Tech (banned) 01-05-06 03:07 PM

Jae Mattic vs Tech
 
Battle Rules:

6 -12 Lines
Crew Votes Allowed
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-08-06 at 03:07 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 01-05-06 03:08 PM

Jae Mattic has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-06 03:08 PM.

System 01-05-06 03:09 PM

Tech has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-06 03:09 PM.

Tech (banned) 01-05-06 03:19 PM

I'll Leave This Kid More Worn Out Than Basketball Players
He Steps On Stage And We Yellin' NEXT, More Than MTV Daters!

I Don't Need Six Bars To Crunch Up This Singer
Cause His Rhymes Slip Off So Much....
.....He's Gettin An Endorsement Deal With Butterfinger!

Producing Universal Addictions Like I Stuffed Your Spouse With Crack
While You Still Sculpting Verses Straight From The House Of Wacks

Mattic? Please! You're Rhymes Cum At Me Slower Than Porn Video's In Slow Motion
See You're Nothing But A One Time Bust, Like Those Immitation Trojans

jr freeze 01-05-06 03:44 PM

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v...r087/Junior.jpg
^^^Sorry i have to do this.....

Class is in session....ima teach u that i already won
Diss him Why...in school he gets it bad...
.............for lookin like eddie munsters son
I've been waitin wit this callout...all night it was sent
An I'm suprised ur on so early...
..............i didnt kno vampires go on the internet
The plate in his head is messin up his headphone recepetion
I never forget a face...but in your case I'll make an exception
I aint need knifes....or even bare a Nine
I got him so shook his eye brow's runnin away from his hair line
Damn i got this battles key...an i'm openin the lock
heard u were a Ladykiller.
...........They take one look at u and die of shock.
Shit plastic surgeory wont help u...go to another place
Look on the birght side...
u've got the perfect weapon against muggers....ur face

noname 01-05-06 04:20 PM

Voted For: Jae Mattic

Class is in session....ima teach u that i already won
Diss him Why...in school he gets it bad...
.............for lookin like eddie munsters son
...Nice
I've been waitin wit this callout...all night it was sent
An I'm suprised ur on so early...
..............i didnt kno vampires go on the internet
...Ight
The plate in his head is messin up his headphone recepetion
I never forget a face...but in your case I'll make an exception
...Dope
I aint need knifes....or even bare a Nine
I got him so shook his eye brow's runnin away from his hair line
..Not feelin it
Damn i got this battles key...an i'm openin the lock
heard u were a Ladykiller.
...........They take one look at u and die of shock.
...Nice
Shit plastic surgeory wont help u...go to another place
Look on the birght side...
u've got the perfect weapon against muggers....ur face
...Good

I'll Leave This Kid More Worn Out Than Basketball Players
He Steps On Stage And We Yellin' NEXT, More Than MTV Daters!
...Ight
I Don't Need Six Bars To Crunch Up This Singer
Cause His Rhymes Slip Off So Much....
.....He's Gettin An Endorsement Deal With Butterfinger!
..Good
Producing Universal Addictions Like I Stuffed Your Spouse With Crack
While You Still Sculpting Verses Straight From The House Of Wacks
...nah
Mattic? Please! You're Rhymes Cum At Me Slower Than Porn Video's In Slow Motion
See You're Nothing But A One Time Bust, Like Those Immitation Trojans
...Sex lines are played.

Ight..one-sided
For starters,tech didn't go enough lines here.His 1st 2 bars were nice.But the others were lackluster.And he also had a cum line in his last bar.And cum lines=played.
Jae Mattic did good.Nice rippin on the pic.LOL.

Vote=Jae mattic

KONCEPTZ 01-05-06 04:37 PM

Voted For: Tech

my vote.

im judging on flow, punches and rhyming.

FLOW: It did seem tech's rhymes flowed very fluently. the rhymes all hit at the right time. Jae Mattics did but not on every line.

PUNCHES: Jae Mattic had some aiight disses and so did Tech. But tech your punches hit harder than mattics.

RHYMES: this is the most important in my book. I look for rhymes that are more technique and the rhymes jae mattic used are not unique at all. i've herad ppl rhyme place,face and won,son by 8 year olds hu got them out of nursery rhymes. Tech definitely had more unique rhymes so he gets this one.

That leads it to 3-0 to TECH in my voting count.

MY VOTE goes to TECH.

Tech (banned) 01-05-06 04:39 PM

thanks for the votes................uppin for more votes!

GKillaz05 01-05-06 04:41 PM

Voted For: Jae Mattic

Jae Mattic - You had a good flow, you used lots of good personals, and ok punchlines.

Best Line - The plate in his head is messin up his headphone recepetion
I never forget a face...but in your case I'll make an exception

Worst Line - I aint need knifes....or even bare a Nine
I got him so shook his eye brow's runnin away from his hair line

tech - You had an iight flow, you had some good punchlines.

Best Line - I Don't Need Six Bars To Crunch Up This Singer
Cause His Rhymes Slip Off So Much....
.....He's Gettin An Endorsement Deal With Butterfinger!

Worst Line - Producing Universal Addictions Like I Stuffed Your Spouse With Crack
While You Still Sculpting Verses Straight From The House Of Wacks

OVERALL - This was an iight battle, both MC's came hard. But I give my vote to Jae. He had the better punches and his flow was better. He also used better personals. Tech you had some good punchlines, and a ok flow, he just had more personals.

Vote - Jae Mattic

Tech (banned) 01-05-06 05:33 PM

Aight.................uppin this shit...................

jr freeze 01-06-06 01:29 AM

upppiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnn............................. .

Excetera 01-06-06 04:47 AM

Voted For: Tech

Punches-Tech
Wordplay-Tech
Flow-Tech
Over-all-Tech

wasnt feeling jae punches or rhyme scheme at all...tech had a more solid complex verse.

Vote-Tech

Tech (banned) 01-06-06 01:16 PM

thanks for voting....uppin for more................

Magic5 01-06-06 09:21 PM

This was feedback posted for Jae Mattic
 
I really think you bit some of your verse. I've seen some of those lines before..

Tech (banned) 01-07-06 02:06 PM

I Knew It. Sobe Warned me About This, Fucking Bitter, Don't Worry I'll Take You Down.............


bitten lines

The plate in his head is messin up his headphone recepetion
I never forget a face...but in your case I'll make an exception
I aint need knifes....or even bare a Nine
I got him so shook his eye brow's runnin away from his hair line
Damn i got this battles key...an i'm openin the lock
heard u were a Ladykiller.
...........They take one look at u and die of shock.

i'll get links to prove this.............


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