Tha 1 An Onlii B vs OneStepBeyond
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 01-08-06 at 04:43 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Tha 1 An Onlii B has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-06 05:20 PM.

OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-06 05:23 PM.

This kid is wack, so you're only way to compete is to cheat,
'Onlii B'.. You don't need two 'i's to know you seein defeat,
Voted for me against L.G... Reason? "You suck, droppins a waste,"
Too bad ya can't vote on ya own battle or you could copy and paste,
Bring dopeness? I guess he left his, so okay have a seat,
Or you'll get hit quicker than def kids who play in the street,
Battling Kirk? Damn that'll hurt, so most may think hes loony,
Don't worry... my lyrics will 'Bam-B' like that disney movie,
Asking if your dope too many, "Even the slightest portion?"
They wouldn't 'sajak' even if they were watch the wheel of fortune.*

*-Pat Sajak hosted the wheel of fortune. You should get the rest, if not then don't vote.

Tryna be the dopest, u aint good enough for a respond
Act like ya dope but in whackness u one step beyond*
Swallow your pride like im swallowing ur soul combined
You aint beyond shit thats y i claim YOUR SOUL TO BE MINE
Your the least apreciated, no skills found in your mad whack writtens
Your so whack you aint even got skill in the ones that youve bitten
Ya your probally addin multis "doc" but skill u have none
You'll be like iverson cus you'll have an i.v. in the e.r. son**
Skylining my skills, its funny cuz im so far above you
Think its a "game"?,Tha 1 an onlii murdered OSB wit lyrics, theres a "clue"***

*Jus name play
**It says "doc", like doctor, and it says IV and ER like tha ER, tha emergency room..yea ya get it
***Like tha board game clue where you say like so and so killed bla blah with a certain weapon

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

Battling Kirk? Damn that'll hurt, so most may think hes loony,
Don't worry... my lyrics will 'Bam-B' like that disney movie,
Asking if your dope too many, "Even the slightest portion?"
They wouldn't 'sajak' even if they were watch the wheel of fortune.*

lmloroflflflf, osb won

uppin on this battle that i seriously lost in...cmon get it over with, hit us up wit some votes

This was feedback posted for Tha 1 An Onlii B
 

pollz............................................. .....

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

Damn this was easy for ya Kirk. lol But hey it's not your fault your a lyrical Jesus. Oh well back to life. *watches porn*

Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

Tha 1 An Onlii B:
Tryna be the dopest, u aint good enough for a respond
Act like ya dope but in whackness u one step beyond*
6/10 - Good Personal.
Swallow your pride like im swallowing ur soul combined
You aint beyond shit thats y i claim YOUR SOUL TO BE MINE
6/10 - Good Punch.
Your the least apreciated, no skills found in your mad whack writtens
Your so whack you aint even got skill in the ones that youve bitten
6/10 - Good Punch.
Ya your probally addin multis "doc" but skill u have none
You'll be like iverson cus you'll have an i.v. in the e.r. son**
7/10 - Good Wordplay.
Skylining my skills, its funny cuz im so far above you
Think its a "game"?,Tha 1 an onlii murdered OSB wit lyrics, theres a "clue"
5/10 - OK.
30/50
You had a good verse, it flowed well you had good personals, and punchlines and it flowed well.

OSB:
This kid is wack, so you're only way to compete is to cheat,
'Onlii B'.. You don't need two 'i's to know you seein defeat,
5/10 - Good Personal.
Voted for me against L.G... Reason? "You suck, droppins a waste,"
Too bad ya can't vote on ya own battle or you could copy and paste,
7/10 - Good Personal.
Bring dopeness? I guess he left his, so okay have a seat,
Or you'll get hit quicker than def kids who play in the street,
5/10 - Ok.
Battling Kirk? Damn that'll hurt, so most may think hes loony,
Don't worry... my lyrics will 'Bam-B' like that disney movie,
5/10 - ok.
Asking if your dope too many, "Even the slightest portion?"
They wouldn't 'sajak' even if they were watch the wheel of fortune.*
6/10
28/30

You had a ok flow, your punches were good, some good personals and ok wordplay.

Vote - Tha

thanx for tha vote man, uppin for more on this....

This was feedback posted for Tha 1 An Onlii B
 

That was a bullshit vote for you man...

Kirk got this, hands down.

That dude must be handicapped.....







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lmfao saying the SOUL TO BE MINE is a good punch...thats why you're whack GK

If you look at it 28/30 is a higher percentage than 37/50. So OSb would get that vote even by your fucked up ass vote. Loser.