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GKillaz05 vs sabre
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Good Luck :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-08-06 at 09:24 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-06 09:04 PM.
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Even if mistaken for cancer you bein sick is just the fake answer...
Sabre's stlye just flops around on the ground like a break dancer... Like an egg your gettin' beat,I am about to end ya winnin' streak... Why you grinnin' geek?.. when your only defete is verse technique... Growin' old like an antique, and its a shame your new to RapVerse... Sabres style is the worst I will have him leavin in a black herst... I pass the gat to Jesus...as your floatin' to heaven now ya trapt... Reachin the clowds n now you know how it feels to be soul clapped... Quick Keystyle - GOODLUCK! |
sabre has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-06 09:20 PM.
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loyalty right here....well, lets see how big you are
dudes not packin' anything, he's left totally hungry canada's finest? i guess everyone else left the country representing the flag, may not be white, but keep this in mind after this, you'll be more read than the new york times this isn't much of a battle, bitch, there isn't any doubt all i have to do is start a war....and he'll back right out i got a leg up in this one, while this dudes just a cripple the only beaver he's ever eaten, he swallowed a nickle bitch ass, bring your heat with ya, my lyrics will burn it i'll flatten your ass so badly, you can make use for all that syrup canadian bitch, get outta the country Explanation: the canadian nickel has a beaver on it |
This was feedback posted for GKillaz05
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Voted For: GKillaz05
Meh both was good.. Gkilla- Your verse started off good with the opener... there was a nice punch and i liked the multis that you had in the first half of your verse and then the second half they just died out...? Dont know why that is but you verse was solid all around... i liked your punches and your closer made me laugh cause thatw as something similar i used against pop in KORV1's final 4 Sabre- You arnt as wack as i though you was gunna be... i dont really know who either of you 2 are... i have seen G around the site but thats about it... your punches was alright... you had like 2 personals i think but it wasnt really connecting... like i said your PUNCHES was alright... but thats it... you could still use alota elevation... v. G |
you're a fucking whack, obviously dickriding because you're not even active, like seriously
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Voted For: GKillaz05
aight this was a good battle this.... Gkillaz, you had some nice hard-hittin punches in your verse, like this one: Like an egg your gettin' beat,I am about to end ya winnin' streak... Why you grinnin' geek?.. when your only defete is verse technique... ^^^that woz decent, and you pulled off quite a nice multi there aswell. you stayed consistent with your punches throughout your verse which is a good thing, and it flowed well, and had a good structure aswell. sabre, you had some decent punchlines aswell (the one about the new york times), but you had a few played & simple ones aswell, such as this one: this isn't much of a battle, bitch, there isn't any doubt all i have to do is start a war....and he'll back right out ^^that woz kinda basic. i think thats what gave Gkillaz the win, because he had more of a consistant verse. i think he had a better rhyme scheme aswell. your flow was good though, and your structure was fine, just work on your creativity nd stuff. good battle but v/Gkillaz no hate.................. |
stfu this is ridiculous, maybe if you understand my punch
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stfu, you're whack and shouldn't have any votes....you said i'm flopping like break dancers? break dancers have skill you wanker, try throwing a fuckin' decent punch |
Voted For: GKillaz05
gkillaz definately got this shit....i really liked you soul clapped thing and you break dancer part. good job killaz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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