RaGE
 

RaGe steaming out my head I'ma about to blow this rooth off
Cuz im mad as hell and can't stand it to hear the clock tick tock
I shut myself away at home living this life all on my own
I feel like giving up cuz I hate it when i have 2 be all alone
I don't understand why i was put here you'll just get the birds
emcee's step up 2 me and get served like a plate of herbs
you can't beat my funk flow im here to let you punks know
that you can never fuck wid me your gonna love my show
You won't expect an uppercut that'll bash and leave ya gashed
I'm like a cutting machine ready 2 come out and give u a slash
I'ma be stealing all of your cash then come out to bomb ur house
so if i was you i'd watch ya mouth cuz the sick guy's coming out
People think my lifes worth nothing now but I wasn't raised right
Thats why I'm still popping pills so I don't leave with stage fright
My lyrics are bizarre like der addicted to crack i'll leave ya smacked
and have ur ego smashed and cause bombs worse den iraq
Nobody better test me cuz I'm about to attack whores agressively
cuz u ain't experience my life so thats why I just hate u in pity
never has my life been so shitty when all i wanted was 2 be happy
but god sent me a curse 2 have my life turned around and smack me

This was ok, need to work on your wordplay, flow needs some work, some parts really didn't rhyme to me, vocab was ok could have been better overall it was just aight.