JC REAL vs twenty9
 

Battle Rules:

5- UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-13-06 at 08:37 PM

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JC REAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-10-06 08:42 PM.

twenty9 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-10-06 08:43 PM.

Ross battlin me was ur worst situation
u gotta calm down and take ur medication
u think ur better than me cus u got lots a dough
u a punk ass bitch, i'm pimp slappin u hoe
u have a afro wat u thinking ur hood?
i call u the lumber jack cus u the first one who handles wood
u screamin MDC to the top of ur lungs try it
u more faggot in one person then the gay pride riot
u thinking ur gangsta is like ricky martin being straight
two incested cousins fucked ross is what u create

JC Real the mafucka used 2 b kool, but u turned into jacko, now u smoke that dick just like it was tobacco.

i now ya scared bitch, u goin into hiding, i can tell by the hairs on ya head im NOT finding, heads so bald its fuckin shiney.

i no u never put in work on the street, i can tell ya bitch is bored, send her here 2 get a lil skeet , just listen 2 my rhymes, i'll knock the sox of ya fuckin feet.

m.d.c i was born to be, i no ya punk ass wishes u was me, haze got ya all fucked up, ya vison is blurry, yo get ready 4 my fuckin rap fury.

I no my shit got ya think "thakin on this guy aint fair ta me" bitch ya rhymes is weak, get a rhyme dictionary

Ross battlin me was ur worst situation
u gotta calm down and take ur medication
u think ur better than me cus u got lots a dough
u a punk ass bitch, i'm pimp slappin u hoe
u have a afro wat u thinking ur hood?
i call u the lumber jack cus u the first one who handles wood
u screamin MDC to the top of ur lungs try it
u more faggot in one person then the gay pride riot
u thinking ur gangsta is like ricky martin being straight
two incested cousins fucked ross is what u create

no recycling jc real u just ripped off a rhyme you have on ur site

no its changed around man ill change it then
u want me too?

u thinking ur gangsta is like ricky martin being straight
add six faggot punk bitches together MDC whats u create

it's still the same basic theeme u have 2 change the rhymes, ur still recycling

Ross battlin me was ur worst situation
u gotta calm down and take ur medication
u think ur better than me cus u got lots a dough
u a punk ass bitch, i'm pimp slappin u hoe
u have a afro wat u thinking ur hood?
i call u the lumber jack cus u the first one who handles wood
u screamin MDC to the top of ur lungs try it
u more faggot in one person then the gay pride riot
u thinking ur gangsta is like ricky martin being straight
two incested cousins fucked ross is what u create

This was feedback posted for JC REAL
 

LMAO, u post yo verse wrong loc, werd

u 2 gonna have 2 either make a new thred n JC gon have 2 post hiz verse reight, or pm strobe n tell him 2 fix this, werd

Voted For: JC REAL

vote JC Real, for not having stretched lines and actually trying to throw decent punches, both need some work, but JC took this easily, keep up man, you'll get the hang of it

RTF on this please, http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=219121

This was feedback posted for JC REAL
 

not feelin either of these verses, both of you need major elevation...JC Real you told GKillaz that he was Canadas Worst instead of Canadas FInest, take a look at your verse man, itz pathetic, twenty9 i wasnt really feelin it, i didnt like tha way you set up your lines either, it made it harder to follow, jus elevate both of you and JC dont talk shit to ppl that could whore you...1