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trakk*star 01-11-06 08:50 AM

prepubecent(matty mac diss)
 
dissing this kid from where i grew up he made a due date to battle then never droped so im dropin this as my first diss towards tha lil bitch

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=452719









http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219329
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219282
linkz^^^

Mad Dog 01-11-06 09:49 AM

not a bad track...liked the 1st beat...punches were ok...personals i ain't really get due to i don't know mans u dissin but they were used rightly...

i like ya flow man delivery is ok could work on it further...

2nd beat was nice also flows nice work on breath control could point out 1 area specially where ya flow actually fell off due to loss of breath...

this is the first i hearda ya...quality is nice...ya not bad...liked this track

keep droppin :thumbup:

Meziaa. 01-11-06 02:24 PM

^I agree ..

Ya presence is pretty decent..
Nice nice flow..
Like he said, work on ya breath control...
Cool punches.. Got at him hard...

Nice verse..

trakk*star 01-11-06 08:26 PM

werd thanx yeah i smoke madd weed and cigarettes so i do have to work on breathe control than yall bumpin this for more feed

Mentor 01-11-06 08:35 PM

ight im typin while listening...good beat chioce...ur quality is ight aint horrible...the disses are ight some dope ans some are just ight...its got a decent flow....lmfao @ shave ur face...the second beat is ight...ur flow is ight sounds a lil rushed...but lmao at the disses the disses were dope...yo not bad 8.5/10 keep it coming dawg

trakk*star 01-11-06 09:22 PM

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trakk*star 01-11-06 11:20 PM

leave feed people com on....................................fukkin sleeperz
i leave so much feed no one returnz tha favour for fukk sakes

Tha Q. 01-12-06 12:18 AM

vocals...sound hallway-ish


and echoey...


flow is cool...not bad there


pretty good hits


solid


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trakk*star 01-12-06 12:47 AM

werd thanx uppin fo more

trakk*star 01-12-06 01:08 PM

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trakk*star 01-12-06 03:27 PM

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trakk*star 01-12-06 07:20 PM

bump.............................................. ...........................

trakk*star 01-13-06 01:10 AM

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Shazz 01-13-06 01:19 AM

Owned.
and Pwned
Nice beat lmao
Tight lyrics

L.E 01-13-06 02:37 AM

Listening...

Beat is decent...

Flow is pretty good, but choppy and shaky at times. Delivery is good...quality ain't bad...(using my tutorial..?), but overall a good track. Keep it up you elevating steady.

Keep it up.


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