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armagedon
armagedon is comming world is ending
pictures of steel and airplaines bending lending out hands to family and friends how could it be this world has to end army with tanks gun's and grenades children playing throughout second grade head decapetaded blood spewed from legs letting out screams aganey prairs and begs little tinny baby with brother disfigured by blades how the world end armogedons begining today fire starts spewing from skies no longer blue how could this happen happen to you belive it aint fake imagined it's true meteors sparking starting the fuse life has just end which once started with you parted from few love ones and friends barried them two gun's going off scream's echo loud all of the few the good and the proud now take my worning i told you the truth now we is dead no more of abuse |
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This was an aight piece. Some parts i liked. My favorite bar was the first one:
armagedon is comming world is ending pictures of steel and airplaines bending I thought that was pretty cool. The vocab in this was ok and the flow was a little off in some places. The imagery was pretty good though. Keep writing tho, i'd give this a 5/10. Please get at any of my links in the sig, if u havent already. Thanks. |
yeah, you didn't leave any feed.
here's a tip....dont just post random links, this is what will happen: closed. |
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