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D-mat 01-12-06 05:49 PM

D-mat vs Venture
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Feeding allowed
You spit 1st homie?

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-15-06 at 05:49 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

D-mat 01-13-06 05:53 PM

you gonna spit homie?

System 01-13-06 11:23 PM

Venture has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-06 11:23 PM.

Nick Knack 01-13-06 11:33 PM

just like aerobic tapes in the US, you will never see anythin but a shelf,
he'll neva make it big, why? cuz hes so wack he cant even quote himself.
the only good feed he'll get is if someone throws him a bone in a online chat,
i could say say ill throw him down, but hes already down on d-mat.
go home man, cuz kansas is just a place of myth and your skill is fiction,
you rep your city as a shithole, so what does that say bout your writtens?
keep this kid red like rubies, cuz thats the closest he'll come to stones,
who knowz though, maybe he'll be able to afford that nice box for a home.
you just a negative, even photos come out on a bad side you gotta be kiddin,
even with eminem on ya team, you still cant come close to dissin.

D-mat 01-14-06 12:33 PM

alrite check. im accepting.

System 01-14-06 12:37 PM

D-mat has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-06 12:37 PM.

D-mat 01-14-06 12:54 PM

venture dont venture far from home..
cuz no intelligent rhymes come from his dome..
hes like dyke jones and im like chamillionaire..
hes the pop faggot, im keeping the rhymes rare..
anyone form the PSA could merk you to hell and back..
but thats not hard, cuz you like tony yayo on wack crack..
i havent seen your verse yet, but one thing i would bet..
is that your not a rap vet, dont step, your a tame pet
and im rap verses lion, excile you like a u.s hawaiiain..
leave you whining for mommy, leave you a crying..
im spitting this without a feed, but your name is all i need..
liek 50 cent you snitch about weed, and after this you read..
you will just back down like a bitch, like 50, go and snitch..
in this battle you lose like the football team from nati..
bitch yous a fatty, like 100% all beef patty..
don't fuck with the PSA, the dy-nas-TAY!
dont worry, i took care of ya mom the other day!

D-mat 01-14-06 12:57 PM

ok pretty sure i left a line out.

you will just back down like a bitch, like 50, go and snitch..
you need soem dark magic aka with to become finacially rich..

sorry bout that

Snypa 01-14-06 01:17 PM

Voted For: Venture

Flow: D
Punches: V
Personals: If any, they were weak..................
Metaz: V
Multies: No One

V - Venture

weak battle....venture, u did ge tthis, but u dont want the readers to have to think, when u post lines like SO WHAT ODES THAT SAY ABOUT YOUR WRITTENS? takes focus away when u ask questions like that

D-Mat, try to up ya punches and metaphors bro....u were on thee chamillionaire thing, where did 50 come from???
Jus wasnt makin sense to me...u were dissin, not punching... a punch is a COMPLEX Diss+Metaphor

Nick Knack 01-14-06 02:38 PM

aight thankz for the vote..........................

D-mat 01-14-06 03:24 PM

alrite yea keep the votes coming.

Nick Knack 01-15-06 11:45 AM

votez are need damn it!...............................

Nick Knack 01-16-06 02:46 AM

god damn, aint no one voting......................

Valerie 01-16-06 02:50 AM

This was feedback posted for Venture
 
...........................checkin the polls.............

Nick Knack 01-16-06 02:51 AM

dude, stop checking the pollz on my battlez. if u aint gonna vote then dont say shit.


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