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Cant get much better ft' non-fixion
yo, i did a collab wit non-fixion over this twista beat. check it out:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=459856 1st verse-me (one mic) chorus-me 2nd verse-non-fixion |
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listening...lyrics are koo..multis are nice...flow is meh...emotion is not good..u gotta up that dawg...u gotta feel what u sayin...but itll come good as time comes...hook needs to be more hyped up...listenin to non fixion...came in pretty nice..but too low...flow is nice..but emotion is robotic like 1st verse...keep up the lyrics get it up..work on it yall
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aight thanx for the feed yo. uppin for more..............
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uppin.............................................
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Listenin
Beats Nice.... Flow:Work On It,Its Rough,On And Off Delivery:Needs Uppin..It Seems To Bland Presence:Meh..You Seem Scared Of The Mic,Keep Workin On It Emotion:Its Bland,All The Same Lyrics:Good Non: Flows-Aight,Needs Uppin Delivery-Not Your Best Emotion-Again Bland,Needs Upping Lyrics-Koo,Likin Em Hook-Needs More Like YEAHHH!! Factor You Know?,Its Like Too Bland Overall- One Mic:Work on It,Flows Rough But WIll Get Better,Emotions Not That Good,Presence Needs Upping A Lot:Good For One Of Your First Tracks Non-Volume Too Low,Dleivery Not As Good As Your Others Neither Was Your Flow Song:6/10 Keep Workin On It :thumbup: |
thanx for the feed man...........
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dont spit american if ur uk sounds proper gay spit in ya normal accent if it sounds uncomfortable, kee doin it n ull get more comfortable n then your delivery and mic presence will improve.
jus some advice Feed used 1/18/06 "E.C: Fuck being friendly (mad knight diss)" |
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yerr i hear you there, i wanna spit wit my uk accent, but as soon as i start spittin i always change to like an american accent for sum reason |
it is hard but start rappin jus inm ya normal voice everytime u singin along to songs n shit or listen to more uk hip hop coz then ur spittin english lol
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lol, yerr man, thanx for the advice :thumbup:
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Aight the beat is ok...first cat needs more emotion...flow is off in spots delivery could use some work...quality was weird i think i heard some pops...hook was ok but the emotion was weak...Non vocals need to be EQ'd betta there abit low...flow and delivery could use some work...emotion lacked abit...quality on the track was meh but its coo...over-all the lyrics and concept were aight just up ya emotion presense and mixing game some.
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thanx for the feed man. yer im probably gunna re-mix it sumtime, cuz i didnt do the best job of it this time lool
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I like the beat
1st cat...mic has WAAAAAAAAAY to many pops and clicks Back up from the mic and use a pop filter there is too much Tube saturation (bassy lows) in ur vocals I like ur rhyming...but ur delivery and flow are below par 2nd cat lil gritty voice vocals need to be amped I like the vibe here...but u two could murder a beat like this and ur not the start and stop flowing cud work if u had better flow but the quality in this is HORRENDOUS...way too many pops and clicks fix that pls 1 |
thanx man. there aint no pop-filter on cubase though (what i use)..........
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