Apparition vs o.O
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-16-06 at 09:03 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

o.O has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-06 09:03 PM.

Apparition has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-06 09:03 PM.

Wack verse? I Chew-Those, a body bag? Who-Knows!/
I run Through-Hoes, like a "0" in ya name i got You-Froze//*

I Pop-Ammunition and Drop-Competition/
I gotta Cop-Recognition, cuz you can't Stop-Apparition//

Get ready cuz you dont Know-the-Devil/
Its like you swimming in da Dead Sea cuz you Below-my-Level//**

I need a Shot-at-Fame, dont be mad that i Bought-you-Shame/
Plan it out you need a Plot-to-Aim, its like im battlin myself cuz you aint Got-a-Name//***

Leave you speechless as if i Threw-ya-Breath/
Im like your heart mutha fucka the way i beat You-to-Death//****



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* ~ o.O add a "0" o0O <- snowman lol ("froze" scared also, get it?)
** ~ Dead Sea is WaY BeLoW sea level
*** ~ o.O isn't a name lol
**** ~ Hearts beat to death, they beat till you die

Say whatever you want kid, but Imma tell you now I ain't listening
And battling you is like battling air, cuz nothing seems to be hittin me
This battle is plain black and white....even more so then Ricky and Lucy
Makin "dough rise"? NAH...only this "baker's" AVATAR can afford Gucci
Feeling like a diamond in the rough? Well they say diamonds are forever
Drink 'dabeers' vomit and the clean floor is the only shine you'll have ever*
Fuck this "donkey" face....he "can't think" for himself...he is a "dumb ass"
I mean when his mom's "ready" this redneck is already ready to "cum fast"
Next time you want to step...make sure you know who you be dissin
Cuz your at a loss for words...like a thesaurus with all its pages missin!

uppin cmon vote here

wheres the votes at? dont sleep on this battle .

This was feedback posted for o.O
 

lmfao @ recyclin'

who recycling?
i know your not talking about me !

I flipped a concept I used in cypher, but cypher doesn't count....

This was feedback posted for o.O
 

.......................checkin the polls man....................

Voted For: Apparition

Apparition-You took this one nigga you dropped it better, I found no loss of flow from you, so you got the vote.

o.O-Had a few good punches, the lucy n gucci thing, the rest was just same old shit I've seen before.

Voted For: o.O

app- one whole bar was nothing. overall your punchez didnt really do shit. your forced to much shit in there to try and make punchez, really need to work on that.

oo- had some nice punchez in here, but cum lines suck, no matter what you do. just stay more consistant and you will be fine. work on better personalz though.

v- oo

thats kool i guess
1-1 upping for me votes


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