*Antic* vs D-mat
 

Battle Rules:

4 bars (8 lines)
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-17-06 at 01:51 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

*Antic* has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-06 01:52 AM.

alrite check. I'm accepting.

D-mat has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-06 11:31 AM.

antic, dont step your rhymes are to childish..
your a sucker m.c, aka my favorite dish..
you got 4 posts, and you're gonna beat me?..
you got a better chance at "fag of the year", g
me and yo mama had fun, what i mean, all night long
naw just kidding that who is ugly, but she sure did love me..
she told me you were a bastard child, didn't know ya father..
i could keep flowing, but you suck, why bother?

Like midg-ets your style's inch-es short like height-re-quire-ments...
I'm ripp-in' up "D" welcome "mat" early to make'um try-re-tire-ment//

Like mind games I'll wreck-his-head like bullies punch-thru-geeks...
I'm a wres-tlin'-ref the way I'm smackin' this 'mat' like it's "1-2-3"//

I'll bust thru "Paul's" "Wall's" and rip the "Mike"-from-this-"Jones"...
Fuck avatars I'm a half-time show see the way I light-up-his-dome//

My uppercuts send you up so high you gotta take ya-meals-in-air...
Leave ya-feel-in'-bare cuz I ripped the bling off this Cha-mill-ion-aire//

Voted For: *Antic*

D-mat-Garbage, all shit was weak, below basic, only thing maintained was flow from you.

*Antic*-You topped him, everything you had was better, punches, etc..

This was feedback posted for *Antic*
 

Your verse was fucking annoying.

uppin' for votes on this one...thanks for tha constructive feed ya ass.

alrite uppin for votes...lets do tis

uppin' for some votes...c'mon yall......................

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Voted For: *Antic*

i have to give this to antic. dmat, like i said you ain't dissing anyone. you need to get some help on elevating, if you want i'll help you out......antic did have a few played out lines and lines that were shitty as well but he did come harder and structured his entire verse better. oh and don't use these -, these ' and these " in your verse so much, it makes it look unprofessional. but cut thesee - from it totally.

thanks for tha feed, I'ma learn from that, thanks for tha vote.

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uppin this for some more votes........................

Still uppin this for some more votes........................