Blackmage vs Chief
 

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Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-06 11:58 AM.

This tick is all tock so "watch" as he get's sprayed
and when i clock you, rappers passin'll yell FLAVA FLAAAV
covered every base but your balls so i'll hit his dick wit a slider
your tracks, the only ones that herum are dick riders
your tracks are X-Lax but you got no guts to spit out
when i pull the sword from the chief
...............................you'll learn to cut that shit out
your the chief of 2 thrones i'm guessing shit and wack right
well prince of persia lips together or you'll get crowned twice
if you was any more gassed then the farts would fly
give up rap, just finish playin with your art supplies



tick is all tock(talk), a herum is a kings group of concubines
pull the sword from the sheathe, prince of persia(game) prince purse your lips together,

that's all the explaining i guess good luck chief

Chief has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-06 10:54 AM.

Voted For: Chief

ehh, Blackmage had a funny ass opener, not tha best punch, but i laughed, lol.

sheif, u had a nice closer. n sum aight punches.

both o fu need 2 werk on ya punches.

I’ve saw bust pipes with better flows than you, you’re officially the wackest rapper
Ay Black, just call me old age with the way I’m throwing lines at’cha

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This tick is all tock so "watch" as he get's sprayed
and when i clock you, rappers passin'll yell FLAVA FLAAAV

n scence sheifs iz mo of a punch, i gotta vote sheif. no hate Blackmage, keep werkin on ya shit holmes, werd

What the fuck man...chief i can't even hate that B lacks game line was funny as hell, where the fuck did you get that shit :laugh: good shit man uppin

Voted For: Chief

both of u had a good verse but i believe chief had this one wit more personals and punches.

punches:chief
personals:chief
metas:blackmage
structure:both
flow:both
voted for:chief

like i said both ya'll had a good verses but in my eyes chief came a lil harder...my opinion rtf on n e of my battles peace

Voted For: Chief

Chief:
Ayo, Blackmage you wack, all I gotta see is fat chumps and I aim
Let’s do the facts, you could be “lost in a maze” and still wouldn’t “lose weight”
6/10 - Good Punch.
I confirmed your audio page, oh no what a devastation, oh what a shame
“Blackmage?” No, I’ll play scribble scrabble with your name, now it’s clear that “B lacks Game”
8/10 - Good Personal.
Oh, you didn’t like that last punch huh, you remind me of a clock, straight wound up
Are you insane, mainstream?, Nope, keep eating though ’cause that’s the only way you’ll blow up
4/10 - Nah.
Sending me private messages, can I help elevate you, dude we all hate you
Stop asking the same old question, you can’t rap, you lack “soul” like a “broken shoe”
6/10 - Good Punch.
I’ve saw bust pipes with better flows than you, you’re officially the wackest rapper
Ay Black, just call me old age with the way I’m throwing lines at’cha
5/10 - ok.
29/50

You had a good flow, you used some good wordplay, had some strong punches and good personals.


Blackmage:
This tick is all tock so "watch" as he get's sprayed
and when i clock you, rappers passin'll yell FLAVA FLAAAV
3/10 - didnt like it.
covered every base but your balls so i'll hit his dick wit a slider
your tracks, the only ones that herum are dick riders
3/10 - NO!
your tracks are X-Lax but you got no guts to spit out
when i pull the sword from the chief
...............................you'll learn to cut that shit out
5/10 - ok punch.
your the chief of 2 thrones i'm guessing shit and wack right
well prince of persia lips together or you'll get crowned twice
4/10 - ok personal.
if you was any more gassed then the farts would fly
give up rap, just finish playin with your art supplies
5/10 - ok closer.
20/50

You had an ok flow, your punches where ok, you had iight personals.


OVERALL- Sheif gets my vote becuz he had the better punchlines and his flow was better and he used good wordplay. Black you had alot of basic shit, and it was kind of played, you should have used better wordplay.

Vote - Sheif

Voted For: Chief

Vote - Chief

I thought Blackmage took flow, I thought both cats had flow, but Blackmage was more consistent in his flow...I thought that wordplay was pretty close...Black mage had a good first bar with wordplay, but Chief had wordplay spliced through out his drop...particularly like the whole rearrange your name thing...pretty dope...and Chief's closing bar was good. Multis were a tie...nothin' too flashy from either, but it didn't detract from either drop...Chief took personals easily, he had them, they complimented his punches well, along with the nice wordplay. Decent battle from both, keep doin' ya thang.

Vote - Chief

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Voted For: Chief

a yo way betta flow boi and betta structure nice punches which were harder my vote// chief