Blackmage vs Venture
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-17-06 at 03:24 PM

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Venture has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-15-06 02:02 AM.

man hes a docta, where did he graduate cuz from his sound,
this diss is gonna be even worse the second time around.
if hes hip hop, then i guaruntee that the future is grim,
even if he was close to dope, ive already smoked him.
you in the negativez man, and you just even when ya talk,
and this kid is definately strange, he boasts bout bein wack.
ya state cant even help ya man, so just quit and move out,
you couldnt get down even if you moved to the dirty souf.
got rocks in ya mouth, or maybe just some tennis balls,
no wonder everybody is dying, who would want to give him a call?
hes full of metal in his head, maybe thats why he cant fight ya know?,
cuz he went and died from lead poisoning in his songs long ago.

Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-16-06 02:21 AM.

Sorry i tried flexxin ya, by mistake i bent ya bones
head bang till i split ya dome, i'm here to help you venture home
You spit garbage vent ure fumes, the smell wouldn't be wit
even if i was scared of you...you still wouldn't be shit
really quit fore your throat gets slit, you can't rap why ask me
killing this whore, in other words.........
.............................we'll watch this psa Dy nasty

psa is close to pussy

Quick 6 lines, if you don't get anything then don't vote

Voted For: Venture

....................checkin the polls.............

oops remove that i ment feedback ight fam. :thumbup:

needin some real votez.............................

god damn, come on people..........................

Voted For: Venture

Vote: Venture

Both threw some punches, they weren't awesome punches, but Venture had some more stank on his. Blackmage had some personals but they weren't that strong, but venture didn't have any, so Black mage took personals. Flow was a tie, both catz had flow, I didn't like one over the other. There was no real wordplay from either of these catz, and that's fine, but know that wordplay and personals inhance punches. Both verses were alright, but Venture came a little harder, so he took this one.

vote: Venture

Voted For: Venture

my vote goes 2 venture u had more and better rymes and they flowed more better

blackmage u did ok u gotta elavate and u would do better

wanna close this mage?............................

Voted For: Venture

Venture - You had a good flow, you had some good punchlines as well.

Best Line - man hes a docta, where did he graduate cuz from his sound,
this diss is gonna be even worse the second time around.

Worst Line - you in the negativez man, and you just even when ya talk,
and this kid is definately strange, he boasts bout bein wack.

Blackmage - You had a good flow. Didnt do many lines, shoulda came this soft vs me.

Best Line - Sorry i tried flexxin ya, by mistake i bent ya bones
head bang till i split ya dome, i'm here to help you venture home

Worst Line - really quit fore your throat gets slit, you can't rap why ask me
killing this whore, in other words.........
.............................we'll watch this psa Dy nasty

OVERALL - This battle goes to Venture. He had the better verse. Used more lines, and punches. Black I never seen you come so weak. You used played lines, and didnt have any wordplay.

Vote - Venture

one more vote.....................................

Nah just wait for the fifth vote and it'll get closed