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DQ 01-16-06 03:25 PM

shodown vs. Tech Skillz
 



Check-ins are due WEDNESDAY
Topical pieces are due FRIDAY
All the voting ends on SUNDAY

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I'll post the topic thread right away, opponents do not have to agree on the topic, they can write on different ones!



-Substance- 01-17-06 02:41 PM

damn, thanks for not choosing the topic, cause last weeks topic was gay as hell, but checkkkin inn......

DQ 01-17-06 02:47 PM

You could've always requested a new topic though!

-Substance- 01-18-06 11:25 AM

My Thoughts While Roaming....
Escavating For The Truth, Wodering Why I Lay A Few Steps From The Devil's Throne.
Was Never Evil, But My Life's Sequel Has Me Lonely, Only Kickin Several Stones,
While My Vessels Constrict, I Find My Life Supply Indicating My End Is Near.
Investigating Why The Eyes That Guarded Me Would Sell Me To That Which I Fear.
Hustle Me Into The Satan's Mansion And Leave Me Anxious For Answers,
For I'm Now Loosing My Roots To A Disease More Than Victims Of Cancer.
Could It Be A Trade? Well They Say One Man's Misery's Another Man's Rise To Victory.
For I'll Be Another Page In Life, Another Overlooked Human Being In History.
Pick My Thoughts Up As I Come To Conclution, For It's Time To Begin.....
A Journey Trough The Streams Opposite From The Glory Road To Repent My Sins.


My Journey....
Waunder Into Roaming The Depths Of The Earth For A Path Lead By A Dim Light.
Head North With Directions Towards The Top Like A Clocks Hands During Midnight.
With My Courage Empacked In A Cartriage, Move Out To Take A Look At The Carnage,
It Was Never Portrayed Like This, A Monstrosity Compare To That Pictured By Artist.
Stare And Gaze At This Baren Wasteland Ingulged In Balls of Scortching Flames.
Souls Tourtured In Eternal Pain While More Enter In Shipments To This Moarning Plain.
Stay On Course And Force Myself To Climb Aboard The Step Leading To Armmagedon,
For My Vision Was Lost And I Venture Into Unknown Territory, Not Knowin Were I'm Headin'.

Entering His Thone.......
Budge The Doors Into The Devil's Personal Precint, This Demon's Sacred Sactum.
My Skin Bubbles Up Like Boiling Water Under The Steam Of A Heated Hangun.
Hearing A Voices, Making Some Sort Of Trade, A Dangerous Gamble.
A Soul For A Soul, A Life For Life, Two Great Powers Playing A Battle.
A Hostel Situation Withering My Soul From Noticing The Devil's Presence.
Flipped The Pages To My Story To Place The Period On That Last Sentence.
I Figured It Out Too Late, For What I've Heard, No One Else Has Witnessed,
That The Two Biggest Wonders In The World Make Life Just A Business.
For I Know Now I Won't Be On A Vessel To Home, Hell's My New Residence,
And Medicine Won't Settle In The Hell Withing For Medallin, I'm Heaven Sent.....

Journal!st 01-18-06 05:34 PM

check..............nice TECH.

Journal!st 01-18-06 05:37 PM

my topic is FALLEN BUTTERFLY................will drop later like tomorrow or friday.

DQ 01-22-06 07:54 AM

shodown no-showed and Tech Skillz gets the win. Nice piece btw!


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