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G Deuce 01-17-06 12:37 AM

Along Wit You - Featuring L.E. *Hot Track*
 
Collaboration with Limited Edition. Really emotional track from both of us. Real life stories boys and girls.

Along Wit You - Featuring L.E.
(Click above)

Verse 1 : GDeuce

Verse 2 : L.E.

Verse 3 : GDeuce

Beat : Wouldnt you like to know. (and if you do, dont ruin it for everybody)

I dropped feedback for L.E.'s Jealousy and Socrates The Return.

trakk*star 01-17-06 12:45 AM

yeah i love thisssssss beat............................

first verse..............

flows nice...............

delieveryz nicely done...........

lyrics r illy..............

emotionz good..........

second verse...........

flow is good.............

delievery is on...................

lyrics r meaningful and nice.............

emotions dope also

third verse..............

flows nice................

lyrics r betta in this verse more visual.............imo

emotionz sikk again in this verse...............

good track both yall nice verses beatz illy

overall 9/10 sikness rtf on my new track com on girl

Tha Q. 01-17-06 12:55 AM

1st off, I have the mixdown session for our gospel joint and I've figured out why the quality was compromised the last time. I'll mix it again and send whenever I see you.


Beat is good

Deuce...flow is mellow and smooth...nothin major either way

good...verse goes by quickly, it seems


LE...comes in with a tad too much excitement...bring it down a notch to match Deuce...

what is that knocking in the mic in a couple spots? or is that the bass in the beat?

iono

Ur flow is good here...not bad

verse seems to fly by as well

are those 16s?

wow


str8 hook


3rd verse...real personal lyrics...u told a story and it flowed....props on that


nothing major in this track either way...was nice to listen to



stay up


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G Deuce 01-17-06 11:37 AM

thanks for the feedback, uppin..................

L.E 01-17-06 02:11 PM

Thanks for the feed...

Will return favors, so uppin'.

G Deuce 01-17-06 08:22 PM

uppin.....................

Paranoid 01-17-06 09:10 PM

first thing i realized was the vocals a bit to loud. but of course I had to feel the verse. the fuckin shit soundin good, nice dope smooth lyrics comin in. quality was nice I liked the mix you did G, Limited Edition man i thought you did good the only disadavantage about your verse was the quality, to many pops man. the lyrics were good and for the most part when them pops wasn't comin around your flow stood solid man. overall I like this track I'm think bout downloading it, though the quality is a bit weak:(

Critic 01-18-06 06:28 AM

Really nice mellow track with deep heartfelt emotions,.. no intro
just started with the hock which was nice could have worked on
that a bit more but its all good.

G flowed well nice in the 1st verse u carried your voice well kept
the song really mellow, had deep emotions, I have lost a family
memeber from Cancer so I can really relate.

L.E whats good fam's, u kind of jumped messed up the mellowness
of the flow when u come in but u made it up, you sound good I kept
hearing a popin sound, not sure if it was on the beat.

Last verse and close was nice really emotion, dope track by both it
when well quick and it was a really good listen.

Stay up both

1~

G Deuce 01-19-06 12:31 AM

fasho, uppin..,.....

G Deuce 01-19-06 11:10 PM

uppin...............................

Willa 01-19-06 11:52 PM

both of u should bump up my little idiots song with ill gramatix
beat is ok different which is cool
flwo is good deuce liek usual different lyrically it was ok nothing special but was pretty cool
delivery was good mellow fit the track mad good
i was feeling the second verse better lyric wise
voice you know ur voice is sexy you were working it lol
le flow is odd seems wierd the way ur saying words to make it fit the beat flow was ok on this def not the best ive heard from that
of course quality was ur downfal sounds like popcore pop pop pop pop lol
delivery was pretty good you toned it down props on this
outro was ok i guess
overall track 8/10

snipes 01-19-06 11:56 PM

dat shit was hot Deuce
and nice choice fo daa beat dats creative man
L.E verse was good
ovaral 8.5/10

Willa 01-20-06 02:50 PM

hey deuce id appreciate it if u could drop the links to ur feed so i can look at them :)


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