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lumberjack 01-17-06 08:03 AM

Look I’m guy with direction and ill like eye infection
 
Look I’m guy with direction and ill like eye infection
So stink and bliss you can’t wink at this spy connection //
On roads the traffic is dark like graphic art a reflection
Of over population can stop a nation and leave rejection
Among tourist travelers the purest grabbers of money //
Rip microphones while flesh flies this mess fries brains funny
My flow flies like bow ties in the wind like dragons blow fie
Best recognize this trend this stuff even corrects wise men try
Reach folks and teach them hope, my script loose like a slip
Noose but still grip truth and reality float boats and guide a ship //
This clout soars and outscores many in the rap category a real trip
To stand here holding a can of beer now pop the top on a bud Light
A thug with insight in the club all night, see a girl with a tight
Round brown butt I try ignore but her wig I adore gave me hype //
Easy riding horses but if you rattle man best have a battle plan
Or you’ll be black and tan with bruises he uses his fists understand?
Hand to hand combat in effect and my habitat wrecked no land
Left

scanz 01-24-06 12:44 AM

it had good rhymes but i didnt like the way u put use to them. try makin more a story or someone u want to diss instead of gettin a bunch of good rhymes and wasting them on nuttin.

S to the Z

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Indeph 01-24-06 12:26 PM

Omfg you make no sense at all. Ever.

tornado480 01-24-06 09:53 PM

thanks for the props but I have a question lot of cats use big words and can't understand every day people shit what the fuck up with that huh?


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