Speats- Judgement(please peep ill rtf)
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=294478

i left feed on spul'S and Unf's track

please leave feed, i fixed the quality

I'm in love wit this beat... it sound like you were having a hard time keepin up wit the beat at some parts, your presence is pretty good, but you should work on clarity cuz there were a lot of parts where I couldn't quite understand you... I have an idea of where you are going wit this track, just keep workin at it. I'll peep it when it's complete. :thumbup:

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listening the beat is amazing..has a scottish vibe to it lol....quality is much better mayne..i told u dawg...presence is good fam....flow is really nice...u fittin the beat nicely...im feelin the yrics too...emotional beat...ure articulation is getting better..id like to see the final version....

thx bro........

too much hiss in ur vocals

beat is cool


flow fits the beat


tough to make out some lyrics


delivery is repetitious

short...but not bad dawg



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Feed used 1-18-06 "lord i want to live again"

thaNks man.....

post links and ill reopen this