"Gun Ridden Cities"...The Reasons Why We Rap...
 

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Yeah...it's not on the auto-player thingy...

Anyway...I kind of rushed this track...it was four in the morning when I recorded it, and I was tired, so forgive the quality, and the flow falls off in some parts. I just thought I would post it anyway.

Leave links and I'll return the favor.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219956
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219955

listening....beat is dope...quality is okay..cant knock u for it...lyrics are really basic but great..I think you meant it to be basic so niggas cud feel it...flow is koo...hook is nice fam....like the multis in their..rlly like the 2nd verse....great way to enter fam..lyrics take a more sophistication turn but still good..man lyrics are dope...flow is nice....hot shit fam...im feelin the realness...the eminem line is nice...rllly emotional...man im feelin..."its limited edition, but no one listens" love this track..1

I used this beat as well

I think I did


a few clicks and pops in ur mic


flow is good...

lyrics fit the theme of the track well


hook not mixed well, but delivered well


well written


good 1

Thanks...

Uppin for some more feedback...

your quality is mad qierd. I can till you actually use your program to mix it. but you need a new mic or somin man. the pops still show and shit. your flow is pretty good though, it's just your qaulity that effects your sound man. the delivery is good and so is the hook. overall I thought the track was good but the quality is really bad man. idk but it really shows on this track. mos def get a new mic man.

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