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Last Breath (MC Collabo)
HTTP://www.soundmetro.com/artists/Mic Cannibals
Titled: Last Breath ______________ Replied to: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219890 & http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219949 |
drop two links to feed bakk youve left or theyll close thisill leave feed soin
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I just said what two tracks I replied too... and actually I've replied to like 6 including 2 of yours |
The beat is nice, i like the hook, it's pretty catchy........sounds nice.. the first verse was alright, but the second verse was way better, real nice..keep it up
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Oh shit I almost 4got
I spit 1st... Synz spits 2nd... and he sparks the 1st 8 bars on the 3rd verse, and I clean it up with the last 8... That's Synz on the hook |
this is pretty good hd...kinda feeling it.
your verse was good...shit made me chuckle a few times. synz verse was nice. only real critique i could give you is that you need to match the beat. your lyrics were there...but the beat seemed fast paced and intense, and you sounded pretty laid back when you were rhyming. |
Damn homie this was pretty sick i was really feeling this..You had a pretty sick beat..1st verse was okay lyrically it would have been better ..your delivery was tight..the hook is sick...2nd verse was sick i was feeling the delivery nice punchlines..good lyrical verse..3rd verse ..tight ass verse..nice delivery..good lyrical verse..good punchlines..overall nice job H.D keep it up.
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post the links or im going to close this
i dont have time to go look for everyones feed its not that hard to post links |
This was hot man, i loved the hook. I thought it was really well done. The beat was really nice too. The 1st verse was aight, the 2nd was prolly the best one, and the 3rd was pretty good. I heard a lot of nice punches in this too, ur delivery was good too. Keep it up, this is the first song ive heard from u. I hope u keep making more, cuz i like ur stuff. Peace.
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kk lisnin.....................
beat sounds nice................. delieveryzice bro works well on this beat.................. lyrics r illy..................................... flows killa also fits beat perfect...................... hooks dopeness............kinda plain but works nicly secdond guy......................... flow seems rush at first then getz on................... lyrics r dope also....................... delieverys nice...................... qualityz nice on this track............................. good drop.................9/10 rtf on one of my trackz Feed used 1/22/06 "how does it feel(unfs track i just collabed)" |
u know what i think of this HD hot drop
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tahnk you for dropping links
if you get a soundclick page you will get more feed |
aight I'll uplaod it to my SC page later today... thankx for the heads up
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