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Faime S. Quotez 01-20-06 07:52 PM

John.Hendricks vs Tech Skillz
 
Battle Rules:

4-6 Barz
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 KO::4-1 TKO
G'Luck

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-22-06 at 07:52 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

System 01-20-06 09:24 PM

Tech Skillz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-20-06 09:24 PM.

System 01-21-06 02:33 PM

John.Hendricks has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-21-06 02:33 PM.

Faime S. Quotez 01-21-06 04:04 PM

I'll leave ya strategies revealed and then sonned, killed him for fun
Tech Skillz?....Even ya name shows you only hold the skills of a gun
'Mildew ya lungs' like 'Breathin Bacteria'..please get back, hear me, bruh?
you'll leave wit snapped ears because ya keys got smacked serious
You'll lose wit ease and act furious, for thinkin ya cerebral's superior
when Im done, even "in your nightmares, you'll scream"...
....like "havin dreams of hysteria"..
Who thinks this dude is ill? Naw, he's just under confusion still
for thinkin he'll beat me, cause if I "stopped practicing"...
....thats the only way Im "Losing, Skillz"..
When your improvement builds, then come back for redemtion
this cats just a misfit, who got mislead to tryna clash with the sickest
Stop tryin to see me in this game cause you'll easily get maimed
RV peeped all of your verses...
....and the only "skills from you we seen" is "in your name"...

Uppin For Tech Skillz..!!

-Substance- 01-21-06 09:51 PM

Poppin This Kid Out The Package More Than Strugglin With Mento's
His Rhymes Ain't Bitten, They Just Hand Me Downs.....
..In Other Words, Rentals!
You Can't Aim, Your Gun Pointin Out Of The Picture In This Battle
See You Got Two Balls In Your Throat.....
.....But Neither One's Your Adams Apples
You Look Like Me Why? Cause Your Mom Let Me Bless Your Seed
Either He Gone.or.he.a.....
....Pussy With More Hits Than S.T.D's!
You Be Running, But You'll Never Glimpse Me Trying To Run And Hide
For The Only Time I Limp........
....Would Be From Granting Your Mom A Piggie Back Ride!

-Substance- 01-21-06 09:51 PM

uppin for some votes homies.......................

-Substance- 01-21-06 11:44 PM

uppin for some votes on this..........................

GKillaz05 01-22-06 12:08 AM

Voted For: John.Hendricks

John.Hendricks - You had a good flow. You used some good multi's you also had some pretty decent punchlines.

Best Line -Stop tryin to see me in this game cause you'll easily get maimed
RV peeped all of your verses...
....and the only "skills from you we seen" is "in your name"...

Worst Line - You'll lose wit ease and act furious, for thinkin ya cerebral's superior
when Im done, even "in your nightmares, you'll scream"...
....like "havin dreams of hysteria"..

Tech Skillz - You had a pretty good flow. Structure could use some work. You used some ok punches.

Best Line - Poppin This Kid Out The Package More Than Strugglin With Mento's
His Rhymes Ain't Bitten, They Just Hand Me Downs.....
..In Other Words, Rentals!

Worst Line - You Be Running, But You'll Never Glimpse Me Trying To Run And Hide
For The Only Time I Limp........
....Would Be From Granting Your Mom A Piggie Back Ride!

OVERALL - This was an ok battle. Both MC's did there thing, but I give my vote to John. H. He had the better flow, he used some good mutli's and he had had some good punchlines in there. Tech you came pretty weak in this battle, your punches wernt as good as before, and you didnt use any wordplay.

Vote - John.Hendricks

Chi-townz Crime 01-22-06 12:17 AM

Voted For: John.Hendricks

a yo john took dis one overall betta verse and harder punches iight fo sho

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

*Antic* 01-22-06 08:02 PM

Voted For: John.Hendricks

Vote - John Hendricks

This one was close, so lemme explain...

I thought Tech took flow...Just my opinion, but I thought that some of JH's bars were stretched, maybe it's how I read it, but that's what I thought. I could see Tech droppin' his verse in audio and it would work. Punches were even, both had some awesome punches, and both had some punches that either didn't make sense, or were just lame...JH took Personals, I thought that they complimented his punches, and/or set up his punches effectively...JH also took Multis, some pretty great internal multis in his rhyme schemes...Wordplay was even, both catz had some funny ass shit in their drops...I really liked Tech's gone.or.he.a. line, I didn't see that shit at first...JH had some personals that had decent wordplay in it as well. This battle was hella close, closer than the categories indicate, nice shit from both of yall. Tech, you would've had this if you woulda thrown in some personals probably...both yall are ill.

Vote: John Hendricks

H.D. 01-24-06 08:29 PM

Voted For: Tech Skillz

Truthly Tech only threw a hard punch every other line... spent too much on setting em up... with that being said I didn't think John's verse was very impressive at all... everything he said was either just really played or forced...

Opener: Tech (John's was just more corny)
Closer: John
Punches: Tech (John's seemed forced mostly)
Personals: John
Structure: Tech (it took me a second read to really see it)

Vote: Tech Skillz

-Substance- 01-25-06 11:10 AM

thanks for the vote, uppin for more.....................

-Substance- 01-28-06 12:28 AM

uppin for more votes peeps................................

J. Luth 01-29-06 01:32 AM

This was feedback posted for John.Hendricks
 
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-Substance- 02-03-06 09:04 PM

uppin for more votes.................vote up niggas!


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