H.D. vs ColdSTEEL
 

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Check in by: 01-30-06 at 11:14 AM

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ColdSTEEL has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-27-06 11:15 AM.

H.D. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-27-06 11:20 AM.

No matter ya diss, splatter ya wrists, shatter ya fists, and scatter ya vertebra discs
Herbs today diss, than brag about cold steel, like they really holding it
You ain’t really got the cards, so ya bones I’m foldin’ em, I told ya slim
Good luck, couldn’t see me or MC on the block, if ya whole hood struck
Or even if you were my reflection, beyond your detection, you having training wheels
Not on the same playing field, I’m off the elemental table, you’re just cold steel

Okay..
-PSssh The Nerve Of This Cat,His Rap suck plus His Wordin Is Jack'd.
I Would Prefer 2 Attack...
....But He's A Hormone Deficiency,I Wont Get No Growth From That!
-^Eww,How Gross Is That,BUt its My Pleasure To Fight an Sever His Might!
Cuz Being Dope Suits Me..
...................But For You They Still Try'n Ta Get Tha Measurements Right.
-When I Throw Punches,He Should Duck an Hope I Grazed~Him.
Really,The Only Goode That Connects 2 Ur Lines..
.................................................. ......Are When You 2-Waying Meagan!
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-So Did I Pursway Him 2 get Beat Badly?,But He Can face Defeat Sadly!
Shit..
.......I Shouldve Turn My Back On Him...Sorta Like His Weak Avy!


If You Dont Get Then Dont Vote...Pz...I Shouldnt have tah Explain ISsh!

Uppin#1


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I will RTF if You Leave the link 2 ur battle....

Uppin#2.


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Voted For: ColdSTEEL

Cold Steel-Your structure to me was abit screwed the first time i read it but your punches were like close 8 while H.D. was like about a 5 or six. You had him in punches and content. You used some nice nameplay with his name defining with what it means.

H.D.-You had multi's but you just didnt capitolize on them or the punches right to make them hard hitting. Your punches where about adverage and i felt you could do better. Your structure was alright but still can use a lil help though. Just keep elevating

Punches-C.S.
Struture-H.D.
Multies-H.D.
Personals-C.S.
Wordplay-C.S.
Nameplay-C.S.
Content-C.S.

V/ Coldsteel

RTF on my battle's in the links of my sig. Much apreciated

Voted For: ColdSTEEL

v/coldsteel

H.D. - ur structure wuz fucked up, i had a hard time figurin out wut u were tryna ryme wif wut, im not even sho ho wmany lines u had. weak punches. n u were just throwin in these big werds insted of makin it a good punch.

coldsteel - ya punches wuz aight. ya structure wuz good.

no hate H.D.

werd

This was feedback posted for ColdSTEEL
 

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Voted For: ColdSTEEL

Vote - Coldsteel

I actually thought both catz had good flow, but HD had a better one, it seemed structured well, and I could hear it in my head. Coldsteel has good flow, but a bar in text is much different than a bar in audio...Punches were decent from both catz...Coldsteel took punches, because they were intertwined with some good wordplay, not to say that HD didn't have some good punches...HD's openin' line of his first bar was sicc...HD had good stuff goin' on, but Coldsteel's punches landed harder, to me. Personals was a close one, but again, I think Coldsteel had the play off HD's initials, the line about his avy, and that one about 2 wayin'...Dug HD's elemental table-coldsteel personal, but it just didn't hit as hard...So Coldsteel got personals....Wordplay was taken by Coldsteel, not much of a contest...

Overall, Coldsteel threw some harder punches and had some ill personals...HD, you kinda strike me as a topical cat, not really a battle cat...what was good about HD is that I could see you doin' that in audio...you still had a decent drop, but Coldsteel's wordplay combined with personals and punches won it for him...

Voted For: ColdSTEEL

K..
I'm short on time,so I can't leave explained votes..so take it how you want.

Cold Steel won this.
H.D...didn't really have anything.I think your focusing too much on multis.Your first bar alone had 5 multis,4 sllyable each.Which is far too much.Cut back on the multis,and get punches that diss the other guy.Flow can only help you so much...

Vote-ColdSteel

[B/]Uppin#3[B]...........................................

Voted For: ColdSTEEL

both verses were weak i say but cold steel took this one wit structure

h.d. ur rymes have to get better they were not really lines

vote coldsteel

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