You Will Fall Bacc (Feat. iLL n J Sheist)
 

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You Will Fall Bacc (Feat. iLL n J Sheist)

iLL is first... im on the hook... then Sheist... me on the hook... me talkin... then i finish it off...

http://soundclick.com/unspokenvirtue

uppin..........

UP! damn... wake up ppl...

up wtf... .....

ILL:

flow: was nothing special

Lyics: good

Delivery: couldve been upped

HOOK: Wasnt really feelin it very much....to much repitition

SHIEST:

flow: same as ILL

Lyrics: better lyrics...nice rhymes

Delivery: still couldve been upped....sounds like u trynna be quiet

VITAL:

flow: same as the other two..kinda fuhknee yall got the same flow

lyrics: decent lyrics....nice rhymes

delivery: still couldve been upped

overall decent track

keep doin ya thang boys

7/10

Feed used 2/1/06 "Simple As That"

good lookin on the feed...

i think the shit was middle of the road...the track was nothin special but i respect your grind, keep workin...put ya work in

ok dis beats coo i fucks wit it...ill lyricz is ok sum punchline type shit reminds me of jr writer slightly sum lines are played i.e. kethup lines flows coo deliverys aiight could've been upped...shesit lyricz is ok did son fuck up or was dat pasue on purpose flows decent niggaz aint really ridin da beat rite 2 me...da hooks eh not really feelin it...vital lyricz is ok flows kinda on-n-off 2 me ya dubs sounds off as well deliverys aight...overall dis track was decent...keep it up

word.. arite.

up.

I replied to this in our forum so I'm just uppin' this for you here...