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Yung Wun 01-28-06 07:11 AM

nothing special
 
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...556#post2635556


Im wearin all black with the cover up hoody on
Black gloves, skimask caryin a police batton//

Im ready for all niggas wid problems
Like exedrin for head aches,Ill solve em//

Im back up on my feet ketchin up on my grind
If the cops come,we know who dropped the dime//

Pullin triggers and bussin heads
Turning smart niggas into speds//

Whats good homie, whats the deal
I'll put the gun to your face,hows it feel//

Im out on the block with nothing but the heat
Got a gun that will blow you on your back and off your feet//

Eff what they say bout me,None of its true
I been tottin pistols and fightin sence the age of 2//

You queer ass dudes are turnin femenin
Get the word,Get my boys together and start sendin them//

If you aint feelin my flow than thats your opinion
But disrespect what I say and ill kill you,I aint kiddin//

scanz 01-28-06 06:16 PM

kk was feelin the flow a little, but u need some mutlies. and need to step up on the story factor. cus u were bouncing every where. i liked the part where u said
"Whats good homie, whats the deal
I'll put the gun to your face,hows it feel"
that was good. besides that keep it up.

S to the Z.

ps. b more realistic.


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