Young Dollar vs Venture
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-29-06 at 01:54 PM

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Young Dollar has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-06 02:29 PM.

Venture has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-06 09:49 PM.

only way ya street wise is if you are next to hobos, you still a lie,
why do we need people to die for the dynasty? youre the sacrifice.
He actually thinkz hes good, and to me that’s a bit scary,
Hez been writing since 8? No wonder that shit soundz so elementary.
No one supports this kid, he aint got no one so don’t even lean on me,
He educates sickness and still many live guess he doesn’t teach anything.

This was feedback posted for Young Dollar
 

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Voted For: Young Dollar

young dollar hear, easy W. the punches were felt, flowed good. made sense, had structure. had good mutlies. almost everything was included, keep it up...if you wanna battle, let me know. good read.

vote: YD

man, he barely had punchez............................

Voted For: Young Dollar

Hmmm both verse were rather weak... no real stand out punches in this... but YD's closer was the best punch thrown over all... He also had some other contributing factors that make me lean further in his direction for the vote...

Opener: YD (but it was pretty close)
Closer: YD
Punches: ehhh tie
Personals: YD (by a lil bit)
Structure: Venture
Creativity: Neither
Complexity: Neither
Vocab: YD
Multies: YD

Vote: YD

Voted For: Young Dollar

young dollar got this one he had better flow and rymes and nicer structure

venture i expected more from u . u had some good battles and u can do better elavate u had some rymes thou

vote young dollar

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Voted For: Venture

-This is an L*F*S* Review-

PSA battle. hehehe.

Venture


only way ya street wise is if you are next to hobos, you still a lie,
why do we need people to die for the dynasty? youre the sacrifice.

Sick

He actually thinkz hes good, and to me that’s a bit scary,
Hez been writing since 8? No wonder that shit soundz so elementary.

Hahaha. Nice punch

No one supports this kid, he aint got no one so don’t even lean on me,
He educates sickness and still many live guess he doesn’t teach anything.

Decent.

Young Dollar

Ay you know when I drop you can expect to hit the floor
Cuz I dont take MC's to school anymore, I merk'em to da morge

Decent

Yo my rhymes clean even though they seem obscene to another
Burn you off the scene,Till ya aint seen, like da mom of the venture brothers

If you don't watch the show you don't get it.

Yo crew v.s. same crew, i dont see what you tryna prove to you honestly
But it aint no heroic tale when you become the first to Die for the Dynasty

Not the greatest.

Overall: Well well well. This is my text competition in PSA. lol Nice battle you two. Venture got it with harder personals and better punches. Nothing else really to say here Nice battle though.

word. thankz man. psa represent...................

Voted For: Venture

Ay you know when I drop you can expect to hit the floor
Cuz I dont take MC's to school anymore, I merk'em to da morge
this is weak, ure just saying ure gonna kill him..
Yo my rhymes clean even though they seem obscene to another
Burn you off the scene,Till ya aint seen, like da mom of the venture brothers
this was a wack nameplay attempt..
Yo crew v.s. same crew, i dont see what you tryna prove to you honestly
But it aint no heroic tale when you become the first to Die for the Dynasty
errmm... NO!!


only way ya street wise is if you are next to hobos, you still a lie,
why do we need people to die for the dynasty? youre the sacrifice.
weak, but better than anything Dollar has..
He actually thinkz hes good, and to me that’s a bit scary,
Hez been writing since 8? No wonder that shit soundz so elementary.
rhyming was off, but the punch was clear..
No one supports this kid, he aint got no one so don’t even lean on me,
He educates sickness and still many live guess he doesn’t teach anything.
ok, this was ure weakest bar..


To be honest, this battle was weak.
Young Dollar though came with absolutely no punches whatsoever, just some gay statements about killing venture and one wack attempt at a nameplay. Venture didn't come too strong but at least he had bars that resembled punches. The elementary line was a little basic, the opener wasn't too good, but the closer was the weakest. Still though Venture easily had the stronger verse.

V/ - Venture

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