Young Dollar vs shodown
 

Battle Rules:

10-20 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 k.O.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-31-06 at 01:57 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.


Expired battle close - win

Young Dollar has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-06 01:58 PM.

shodown has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-06 02:05 PM.

You're psycho if you think you'll beat me for this title. I'll beat your skinny ass with Tae-Bo.
You wanna save face? This ain't the place. Try switching to Geico.
Sho... been around this block, and you can tell he's a veteran.
Peeh is like 2 buckets side by side.... Pales in comparison. ------->(pails)
I play Jedi mind tricks I mix psychokinetic force with.
I'm old school. He's home schooled on them internet courses.
SHO is ill-will fulfilled. Gives heeby-jeebies. He be creepy.
I intimidate this keyboard jockey. Make YOUNG D pee-pee on his PC.
We heard of the Pink Panther. You must be the Pink Panty
on a pussy that stinks badly. I mean look. You keep winkin' at me.
Slash this. I'll grind you like an Axle. C0ck my gun. Give you a rose.
What's young is how I make your toes go, plus my pubes below your nose.
young be fake like face lift, ur bars need some medication
ya rhymes...they ain't shit, looks like young got constipation.
weakling? i'll invert ya ass....take a pic of you get your ass ripped..
you the rookie wit them lines..you give mouth to mouth to my DICK!!!
watch me straight rip out ya limbz!/stay quiet like MiMs.
'n they should call u tha "Marshall Mathers of Monopoly" cuz ya "Chances are SliM

Voted For: shodown

Sho... been around this block, and you can tell he's a veteran.
Peeh is like 2 buckets side by side.... Pales in comparison
(Good.)

We heard of the Pink Panther. You must be the Pink Panty
on a pussy that stinks badly. I mean look. You keep winkin' at me.
(Aiight,But Lol.)

young be fake like face lift, ur bars need some medication
ya rhymes...they ain't shit, looks like young got constipation.
(Played as Fuck,But The Spin You Put On It Werks.)

watch me straight rip out ya limbz!/stay quiet like MiMs.
'n they should call u tha "Marshall Mathers of Monopoly" cuz ya "Chances are SliM
(Stretched Like Pregnant Pussy<---*...But Its Good.)

^Overall/=The Concepts You Used Are Nothing New,But The Spin You Put On Em iz Good enough,Dont Stretch Ur lines Tho'.

.................................................. .................................

Aparently he tryna get me to be a parent you see
Dont care i drop right after he gets the check from me
(Good.)

In my state you'll to get crushed easily in rhymes like vine grapes
I throw the hardest punches so you know i got to have mine taped
(Aiight,Good Concept But Bad execution.)

^overall/=Average Verse But Nothing Special...I Like The Those Concepts but Try Executin it a lil better,Cuz Sho Got You With Tha Punches...No Hate Juss Being Factual.

Rtf On My battle With H.D....I'll Provide the Link.

Voted For: Young Dollar

hmmmm I didn't think I'd be saying this but... sho didn't bring the heat till teh second half of his verse... YD came with a yo momma joke off the top, but it was still a better opener... and from there it was just a relentless assult... Some good some weak punches... but all punches...

Opener: YD
Closer: YD
Punches: YD (he threw more)
Personals: YD (the desert Eagle line got em)
Structure: YD
Creativity: Sho
Complexity: Sho
Wordplay: Sho
Enjoyment: YD

Vote: YD

What ever the outcome.........this battle is close as hell folk. G'luck

Voted For: shodown

i voted 4 shodown he had better rymes and punches were more better and ur structure was better overall

young dollar u had some rymes but some didnt even make sense and didnt rymes and that where u lost it

vote sho

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Voted For: shodown

open: sho
close: sho
personals: show
metas: sho
punches: both
multis: young

win: sho

Voted For: shodown

vote: Young Dollar


both verses was so so but i give this to young dollar
flow: Dollar
enjoyable: neither
punches: kinda weak but i give it to Dollar
personals: shodown was kinda direct wit his
structure: Dollar

iight theres my vote wasn't much but theres my vote

Vote switched

my vote is suppose to be Dollar so try to get that change

Voted For: Young Dollar

Yo dis boi from the same spot where I exit my jizz
So before this battle I was already sonnin dis kid
^ok
Aparently he tryna get me to be a parent you see
Dont care i drop right after he gets the check from me
^iight
I don't back clown you get smacked around with a mac round
Im the mac'n town so shodown fosho to get showed down
^ok
How they let you into the syndicate you aint even close to da sess
When your hustlers ambition is just legally sellin drugs from C.V.S.
^nice
You'll get ya head pealed like banannas then get ate by apes
Nigga I aint hungry, so you'll catch hot fillers after my first eight
^nah
Bitch you dont wanna see me cuz all you see is me snatchin ya purse
And I know you E-thuggin cuz i see you buyin guns from Rapverse
^iight
With that little desert eagle you aint gon touch me in my state
I stay poppin wit hot lines by the nyne thatta blow ya mindstate
^ok
In my state you'll to get crushed easily in rhymes like vine grapes
I throw the hardest punches so you know i got to have mine taped
^iight
Snatch mine at dawn showdown my rocks will blind you like woa
Only time you got real ice, is when you got that frozen H2O
^iight
Bitches tease like my rhymes so you can't touch my flow
And all these lines like ya moms body, They all for Sho
^iight

You're psycho if you think you'll beat me for this title. I'll beat your skinny ass with Tae-Bo.
You wanna save face? This ain't the place. Try switching to Geico.
^ok
Sho... been around this block, and you can tell he's a veteran.
Peeh is like 2 buckets side by side.... Pales in comparison. ------->(pails)
^nah
I play Jedi mind tricks I mix psychokinetic force with.
I'm old school. He's home schooled on them internet courses.
^ok
SHO is ill-will fulfilled. Gives heeby-jeebies. He be creepy.
I intimidate this keyboard jockey. Make YOUNG D pee-pee on his PC.
^no
We heard of the Pink Panther. You must be the Pink Panty
on a pussy that stinks badly. I mean look. You keep winkin' at me.
^ok
Slash this. I'll grind you like an Axle. C0ck my gun. Give you a rose.
What's young is how I make your toes go, plus my pubes below your nose.
^nah
young be fake like face lift, ur bars need some medication
ya rhymes...they ain't shit, looks like young got constipation.
^ok
weakling? i'll invert ya ass....take a pic of you get your ass ripped..
you the rookie wit them lines..you give mouth to mouth to my DICK!!!
^ok
watch me straight rip out ya limbz!/stay quiet like MiMs.
'n they should call u tha "Marshall Mathers of Monopoly" cuz ya "Chances are SliM
^nah

V/Young Money

Voted For: Young Dollar

You're psycho if you think you'll beat me for this title. I'll beat your skinny ass with Tae-Bo.
You wanna save face? This ain't the place. Try switching to Geico.
no
Sho... been around this block, and you can tell he's a veteran.
Peeh is like 2 buckets side by side.... Pales in comparison. ------->(pails)
no
I play Jedi mind tricks I mix psychokinetic force with.
I'm old school. He's home schooled on them internet courses.
ur not old school. punch was wack
SHO is ill-will fulfilled. Gives heeby-jeebies. He be creepy.
I intimidate this keyboard jockey. Make YOUNG D pee-pee on his PC.
pee-pee? no
We heard of the Pink Panther. You must be the Pink Panty
on a pussy that stinks badly. I mean look. You keep winkin' at me.
no
Slash this. I'll grind you like an Axle. C0ck my gun. Give you a rose.
What's young is how I make your toes go, plus my pubes below your nose.
no
young be fake like face lift, ur bars need some medication
ya rhymes...they ain't shit, looks like young got constipation.
eh
weakling? i'll invert ya ass....take a pic of you get your ass ripped..
you the rookie wit them lines..you give mouth to mouth to my DICK!!!
no
watch me straight rip out ya limbz!/stay quiet like MiMs.
'n they should call u tha "Marshall Mathers of Monopoly" cuz ya "Chances are SliM
no

Yo dis boi from the same spot where I exit my jizz
So before this battle I was already sonnin dis kid
no
Aparently he tryna get me to be a parent you see
Dont care i drop right after he gets the check from me
eh
I don't back clown you get smacked around with a mac round
Im the mac'n town so shodown fosho to get showed down
no
How they let you into the syndicate you aint even close to da sess
When your hustlers ambition is just legally sellin drugs from C.V.S.
no
You'll get ya head pealed like banannas then get ate by apes
Nigga I aint hungry, so you'll catch hot fillers after my first eight
no
Bitch you dont wanna see me cuz all you see is me snatchin ya purse
And I know you E-thuggin cuz i see you buyin guns from Rapverse
okay
With that little desert eagle you aint gon touch me in my state
I stay poppin wit hot lines by the nyne thatta blow ya mindstate
no
In my state you'll to get crushed easily in rhymes like vine grapes
I throw the hardest punches so you know i got to have mine taped
self-glory
Snatch mine at dawn showdown my rocks will blind you like woa
Only time you got real ice, is when you got that frozen H2O
eh
Bitches tease like my rhymes so you can't touch my flow
And all these lines like ya moms body, They all for Sho
no


Battle was weak here, but since both of you came weak and need improving on punches, Young came a little harder. Just had like, 1 or 2 punches that were okay and came little better than shodown. But foreal both of you need to elevate more.. no hate.

Voted For: shodown

v/ shodown

his last bar was wicked dope, hilarious, dope wordplay, and originality