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20 Ways (Dear Mama) feat. Mardell Maxwell (Ya Bois Back)
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"20 Ways" 1st Verse: Intermental
Hook: Mardell 2nd Verse: Intermental Hook: Mardell 3rd Verse: Intermental Hook: Mardell http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220738 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220715 |
Yo inter ma man, loving that trak dawg, just liek the feeling, and the attitude wit it.. give it 10/10 :D, hooks awsome too :D
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Yeah
intros koo Aight FLows Dope,I Would Have Thought u been rusty but Nooooooooooooo!!! lol deliverys koo,feelin it upp your volume a lil,its hard to hear Emotions koo,fellin the vibe The hooks nice,i cant hear it that well tho:( 2nd Verse: Flows better tyhan first doopppe!! I Like this verse better than the first Feelin these lyrics :) Hook............................................. 3rd Verse: Damn your damn verses keep gettin better lyrics dope........ Hook Weerd:cool: This is dope Overall:8/10 Just upp the vol a lil you need a mic like mine would make u sound doppe! |
thanks fam................
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aawww he loves his mommy :) dude on the hook has a nyce voice, I liked your verses on here yo...sounds like something that could be on the radio with a little more production work...good track dude, flow's on opint andd lyrics were felt...keep it up dude :thumbup: |
lol yup i do love my moms.....she was goin thru a real bad time so this lightened it all up...thanks alot fo ure feed...i apreciate it....
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upppin.................
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comes in......beats ok..
its kinda hard to make out what your saying.....voice is kinda muffled...lyrics that i can make out are good.... the hook is nice....but it seems like its a lil low....... overall i cant say too much bad about this....except for the quality...flow has gotten better from your last few drops....keep it up....im sure your mom loved it |
Thanks fam....yeah quality sucked...:(...but nothin i can do bout that fam...thanks fo the feed
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upppin mayne................
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Damn!
This your best fa sho man, fa sho fa sho lol. I thought that if your vocals on your verse were upped a lil bit then i'd most def download this because the hook is so tight and the beat is smooth. your voice and quality is so perfect now. maybe it's more your quality because you had to much of a hiss before but now it's smooth. your lyrics are pretty good as well. but overall this is a tight track. If your able to fix your vocals volume do that and let me know. i'd love to download this. rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220364 1 |
word thanks fam alot.....i apreciate dat....i dunno how to up the volume but ill try
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I listened to this through my computer speakers and noticed that your mic had a muffled sound at the start inter...
then, the beat was louder than your vocals...amp them 1-2 dedibels beat is nice too flow is cool here...nothing out of place...nothing major one way or the other = straight hook sounds good Ur voice is changing inter...should be interesting to hear how you adapt to that my boy growin up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol...jus messin man nice sounding track 1 |
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Lol thanks fam...I apreciate dat |
Listening...
Beat is cool...quality isn't the best on this...but flow is cool, delivery is on, lyrics are pretty good... Hook is dope. Is this the same guy who was on that "No" track..? Anyway...good track, keep it up... Feed used 1/1/06 "Tides" |
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