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L.E 01-30-06 10:57 PM

"Fall Back"...UNF Feat. Limited Edition...
 
www.soundclick.com/limitededitioncan

Yeah, UNF wanted me on this so I freestyled a quick verse.

YES it is 100% freestyled, I know it's dope haha. ;)

1st Verse- UNF
Hook- UNF
2nd Verse- Limited Edition

Peep and we'll return the favor.

Also this the first track I've posted with my dope new quality. :D Word.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220496
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220944

Kirk 01-31-06 12:04 AM

Decent. The beat is very chill. UNF's verse is hard to hear but he has some decent lines. Only problem with the hook in my opinion is that uneccessary YOOO in it. L.E., great quality now man. Its easy to tell you freestyled that, lol. You said fuckin' alooooot. And you got some pauses in there. But its still catchy. Good shit, fellas.

B To The D 01-31-06 11:37 AM

Thanks.............Uppp

Leave Links!!!!!

Snypa 01-31-06 12:41 PM

UNF

flow: dope

Delivery: decent delivery, maybe coulda been upped

Lyrics: tight, good shit

LIMITED

Flow: nice flow

Delivery: Nice, really feelin it

Lyrics: decent....some played rhymes, but it happens

B To The D 01-31-06 02:06 PM

^^^^^^Thanks.......uppppp

L.E 01-31-06 02:55 PM

Thanks for the feed...uppin...

Tha Q. 01-31-06 03:11 PM

UNF...I don't like how ur riding this beat...makes ur flow sound jerky

but ur flow is good


vocal levels all sound appropriate


hook sounds coo...needs to be ad libbed more though...sounds rather skimpy


LE...ur voice comes through nicely with ur new mic...sounds more natural

flow is good

like the way u chose to ride the beat = no bad


ur flow/delivery would be better with more breath control...think BIGGIE SMALLS



good drop





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B To The D 01-31-06 03:43 PM

Thanks...........

Uppp!!!!

Da Fox 01-31-06 04:06 PM

decent nice flow kid

B To The D 01-31-06 04:59 PM

^^Lol

Thanks

Uppppppppppppppppppp!

Im Listenin To That Crazy Ass Village Pimp Track

Its Funny As Fuck

Enygma 02-04-06 10:35 PM

UNF.....when you came in, you were a little off beat, but then you picked it up. You seem to do well on these slow beats. It does well for your accent cause we can understand your words a little better. Hook is horribly in need of help. Your quality definitely needs to be raised like ten notches. Go read my tutorial man.....I really think it can help you out....

Limited.....you came in pretty nice. Your quality is pretty good on this track. I liked the "they better fuckin prove it" line. You stayed on beat pretty well too.

Good track overall though.....just up the quality UNF :thumbup:™

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221281


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