aim for the top ft chief
 

yoooo, this is sum hot shit right here. me and chief rip this up completely. check it out:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=459856

thurdshift's on the beat
1st verse-me
2nd verse-chief
3rd verse-me
hook-me

links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220190
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220749

Beat: decent

ONE MIC

Flow: flow is decent nothin special

Lyrics: nice lyrics.....

Delivery: kinda weak, could been harder on this track

SHEIF

Flow: nice flow

Lyrics: good lyrics

Delivery: coulda been up for this track...but decent

thanx for the feed man. uppin for more.................

uppin............................................. ...

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm i like the beat who did it????

listnin..................

beat is ight too low though..................

flow is off and on in first verse.......................

deleivery is ok though......................

voice is ok................................

emotion is bland..............not feelin tha pressence.............

chief...................................

good voice.........................

flows good...........................

pressence is much better than first verse

overall not a bad track 7/10
keep up yall

lmao!

yer thanx for the feed trakkstar. uppin for more..........

*listening*

First thing that I noticed was the vast difference in the quality and volume of the two vocals. The add libs by the chief on the first verse was really getting annoying. It was too much. It's cool to do the add libs on a verse separate than your own, but you were saying too much and it was taking away from the dude's verse. One mic.....your flow is robotic, which isn't good. It's monotone, which means every word pretty much sounds the same....the same volume, the same emotion, the same inflection, etc. It makes your verse sound boring. Lyrics were alright, but nothing to write home about. Chief, your verse was a little better, but you started getting the same monotonous voice as One Mic did. I don't know if it's the slow beat that is drawing it out from you guys, but it's really not appealing. Chief, your quality was better than One Mic's as well as your flow and lyrical content, but this is far from a ten for either one of you guys......

Just some constructive feedback, hope you guys use it :thumbup:™

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221281